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Ah, I was surprised to see what this chapter had in store! A lot of interesting stuff, such as the fate of Ponyville's former mayor... which I myself had an idea kind of to do a story with her sometime, if her fate wasn't addressed in this or another canon tale, if she wasn't Gunne's property. Though it hadn't occurred to me she could be the mare Ginna was referring to last chapter... And how they consider Mac an untreatable mentally ill pony... but Gunne's on his side and acting as a sort of confidant.
Gunne's plan to make sure Mac keeps his sister at least, safe and with him still was a bit surprising. I had thought he would say Mac should get more stern as Cheerilee did in the third. I did wonder if he would say Mac should do it himself, making her a red collar; even if I had heard the Apples in Ponyville wouldn't be into incest, before the last chapter.
Fiddly Faddle... that was a surprise, Thungrox being a bastard and shoving all those apples he bought off Mac in her. I had thought he had mated her with an animal/insect creature, or was shoving the apple cores up her privates. Of course, not as much a surprise as the Apples that were blanked and reassigned new identities/lives, because of Applejack's resistance. Which did make AJ see the light to making her and her family members lives' better. Now to see how that goes and how long that takes, at least if it's more than a chapter or two... and how this story will end with AJ and Big Mac after some time has passed. Keep them coming!
OMG just read the newest chapter the wateing payed off keep it up and coming
I must wonder, will we be seeing Big Mac getting laid any time soon?
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Only time will tell I'm afraid. Not wanting to give any spoilers either way, but with the way that Mac is acting it's entirely possible he might go through this entire story without having sex once. Not confirming that, just saying it's possible.
When you really think about blanking, it truly is a horrifying concept, and this does a good job at showing that.
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Sounds like "blanking" is really a euphemism for "lobotomy." How else would all form of thought disappear?
I think this is the best chapter yet of this story. A lot of good character development here. It really makes me happy to get some insight into a caribou character too. I haven't read Sun's Setting, but Gunne is quickly becoming my favorite. Another great this about this chapter is that the length of it felt just right. The pacing was on point and details didn't suffer for it. The end bit with Applejack worked out surprisingly well, given what she was doing. I really want to see some art of her on her knees after reading those files, soaked in the rain and all. I'm still waiting to see if Gunne is gay and is more than interested in Big Mac, because that's the vibe I keep getting from him. It would be pretty amazing to see.
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I could most easily see one of the more reluctant ones askng to have sex with him just to get to do it under their own volition for once.
I just want Big Mac to fucking lose it and lay slaughter to like 60 caribou and stallions...(sigh) but I think that's not going to happen.
I'm going to assume that the other Stallion in Ponyville that's like Mac is Mr. Cake. (though I guess it could be Cranky) If it is I hope him and Mac end up meeting; if its not I hope we find out who it is.
Resistance is futile, until it hurts your family. That is the lever to move Applejack from a Black Collar to a Red Collar it seems. I had honestly hoped Big Mac and Spike would have gone at it teeth and nails. Would have been interesting. Beating a dragon would have made him top dog in town to the other stallions. As for Fiddly, I am half suprised Big Mac hasn't looked into buying her or even Cheerilee at some point. Better on his farm than where there at now.
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It might of made Mac feared, but it wouldn't have made any of the other stallions respect him more than being someone they wouldn't want to fight. Also, as Gunne implied it would've been a big mistake for Mac to fight. Caribou law is not barbaric, where someone can punch out someone you don't like. You cuase a disturbance, you get arrested and pay the consequences. For Mac, it's not something he could've done lightly.
As for buying Fiddly or Cheerilee, right now his farm is just recovering from the aftermath of the fall. He could consider this option latter on, if he gets over his qualms in "owning" a mare, but even then Cheerilee is not available because she is owned by the state. Fiddly might be available, if her master wants to sell her, but then Mac has to consider the rest of his extended family. It might just be too much of a task for him, but we'll see if something to this effect happens as the story progresses.
BTW, if anyone i wondering there will be 6 more chapters and I hope you all enjoy them
5374686 Can never completely tell: How much does non_creepy_nickname and a given author communicate between chapters? :j
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NCN and I communicate a lot when it comes to the creation of this story. I cannot personally attest to the other authors, but NCN dos put his input into my ideas, offers suggestions that I can give my opinion to, and makes sure that everything that I do is proper to how the FoE universe works. He also listens to my ideas and edits the story personally, so he has a part in everything I do. I'm very appreciative for the help he provides too, because it is helping me to make a better story for it.
sorry for my boldness, how many chapters lack to finish your story?
my english is very bad XP
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There are 6 chapters left in the story, though the last one will have an epilogue with it and might be split into 2 parts.
There's a couple of typos here. I didn't record them since I was too entranced by the story. What in the hell is Gunne playing at? Why is he so invested in Big Mac? I hope we get something more than "You and I are alike" in the future.
5388503 Hmm maybe he wants Mac as his second in command for his strength? (I just thought of that now )
Also I'd love to see a Spike and Applejack scene! AJ against a dragon would be interesting!
Gunne is my kind of guy. I feel no qualms in declaring him as mono-white.
so Gunne says he's like Mac and has a slave named Ginna... are they related? She doesn't seem all there so she could also be a blank. Or maybe female caribou are just like that idk.
This gives the impression that the only two Stallions in all of Ponyville that were not affected by the spell of the corrupted Crystal Heart are Big Mac and Mr. Cake. Which is kind of a downer, I mean, I was hoping for other stories like this one.
Gunne is pretty cool. Well...for a Caribou. What he's doing is still wrong, but he seems fairly chill and willing to work with people. Makes for an interesting point of view. I'd love to see more of him. Maybe even a chapter from his perspective.
Is it wrong I ship gunne and Big Mac?
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Huh. That's...new
I guess congratulations are in order. This is the first time I've read a FoE fic with a caribou character whom I didn't want to die horribly. Granted, he's still a fucked up individual, but he doesn't seem evil for the sake of being evil and, while not sympathetic, is much more understandable.
7327441 yes yes it is. only because of what he did to mayor mare that rat bastard.
Gunne: We are not savages, we are civilized creatures and will act as such.
Really, could have fooled me what with how you treat women like sex objects with no feelings.
Gosh, so even Spike has become one of those horrible mare abusers.
I"t wasn’t a caribou, or a stallion, or even one of those traitorous reds"
Russian Whiteism intensifies
I'd be upset too if my cousin was turned into a makeshift fruit dispenser. I can't get a fap out of any of this at all. The few times something would appeal to my fetishes, the context of the narrative just makes me feel awful about everything. I can't wait to see what happens when shit finally hits the fan. I already kinda know about the ending, but everything that leads up to it is still a mystery to me.