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Could it be? A secret Caribou resistance? ... ... probably not, no.
5087024 Any risistance had to start somewhere
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With the Caribou it usually starts about two inches in, give or take depending on how well used the mare is.
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5088123 I really hope That's Not Going to Happen. The last thing I'd like to see in this story is M/M gay sex (especially with Big Mac. ).
P.S. This is already starting to annoy.It is already the fourth chapter. Why in sex scenes Mac appears only as an observer? When Big Mac starts to buck some mares?
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Well I'm not going to say that it won't happen, but it might take some time. Mac, in this tale, really isn't into the idea of having sex when the act has been tainted and is constantly being used to make AJ, as well as plenty of other mare, miserable. Part of being uninfluenced by a spell that makes every other guy sex crazed.
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You're talking about gay scenes? With the main character? If so, then I'm out. Sorry, but I'm not into this stuff.
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No, no, I was talking about Mac screwing a mare. It might happen, but if it does it won't happen until Mac becomes more comfortable with the situation, which if his current mood means anything it will be some time, if ever.
4734934 Read https://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&rlz=1C1CHWA_enGB563GB563&ion=1&espv=2&es_th=1&ie=UTF-8#q=fagots
Oooh sexy chapter!
He probably has plans for Sweet Apple Acres, and for Applejack. Maybe he wants to breed her with someone.
5092447 kekeke, I know.
I would love to see Big Mac invite Thungrox and Fluttershy over for an evening to his place, That could be interesting.
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Might be fun, I remember their was a discussion about gay stallions, I pointed out that they would still most likely use mares as sex toys as they bed each other.
Perhaps Gunned sees what a good job Mac is doing on his own farm and wants to give him more responsibilities, like maybe supervising the animal farm.
I feel this turned out as the strongest chapter in this story. It's pretty impressive that a 10k+ word chapter can be paced as well as this is. A lot of good info came out of this chapter too, without feeling like info dumps or being shoehorn in. This gave a lot more than I expected, and it makes me really eager to see what happens next. Good job here, the quality of the writing really stood out in this chapter. It's rather inspiring to those of us still trying to write FoE stories.
In all honesty I kinda want Big Mac have a chance to secure more of his own kin. I mean yes they are black collars, but do they deserve to be punished because of one mare, no not at all. Plus with more of his family, they at least stand a better chance with BM then any of the other stallions in his family according to Fiddly Faddle. I guess in a way I'd like to see this as dark still, but with a somewhat better ending for Big Mac, the mares he owns, and his family. Cause honestly he himself is a decent owner at the same time fair in punishment, but that's just me. Also I'd like to know what has happened to the rest of his extended family.
I'm calling it now, Applejack's being sold to Flim and Flam! I just know it!
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It might be my own way of looking into the mind of Mac, but to him the "training" that he's talking about is just normal introduction to the new things she'd have to learn in order to do her new job. Like any new employee, the first few days are going to be the easiest as it's mostly just being shown the ropes and being eased into a situation. So for Mac this isn't nearly as bad as when Daisy will have to start doing the real job.
As for the duty remark, it was more an internal realization that these girls, while being put in his charge, are still owned by the caribou and thus in order to keep them they would have to do what the caribou assigned them to do. If Mac went easy on them in obvious ways, like letting one avoid work because of her traumatic experience, then they could just as easily be recalled and reassigned someplace else that would expect more than the bare minimum from her.
Perhaps it is phrased poorly, or looking at it from a perspective that others wouldn't understand without an explanation like the one above. Sorry for any confusion.
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Well that is what I was going for, so I'm glad it all worked out so far. A universe like this isn't always orgies and masochistic pleasure, especially for those who still cling to how things use to be. There are hardships and trials just like any other reality, just more so for those who don't conform. All one in this position can do is just keep on going and hope that things will someday get better, but then again not every hope comes true and not every prayer is answered.
When is next chapter?
5231691 Hello?
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Sorry for the delayed reply, Was a bit focused on other things the past few days. You can expect the next chapter in roughly 2-3 weeks depending on now long the editing process takes. Also, thank you for showing such an interest in the story and I'm happy that you are enjoying it (if I'm to assume correctly)
wow just read all 4 chapters cant wate till next one
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Considering how this is a 'canon' story, and how tightly the original creator holds to the Caribou basically being mary-sue's, I highly doubt that it's going to be the case here. If anything I wouldn't be surprised if the caribou is just going to use another, stronger mind-control maguffin on Mac so that he'll fuck his slaves himself and become basically like almost all other stallions lol.
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Actually I will guarantee you that will not happen in this story. I'm not going to write a tale about Mac's problems in the Fall universe only to have it swept under the rug by mind control.
5303237 That's actually a bit of a relief to hear, and I probably would have felt the same way. It'll be interesting to see where you can go with this.
I know I might be reading too much into this, but 'taking Granny Smith to a care home' sounds a bit like the Nazis? Especially when the Caribou are so evil to women...
Could Thungrox actually be not so bad among the female oppressors? Also there' just one couple I'm curious about, Shining Armor and Cadance, what's become of them in this female distopia? Is Shining doing the same as Big mac having ownership of his wife and just doing the minimal requirements just to allowed to keep his wife close, has Candance been put under the ownership of some other sick bastard stallion, or even darker has Shining Armor actually converted to the new ways and now sees his wife as something to only be used sexually as he sees fit, all that love gone and now replaced with a sick master servent relationship? I really just can't help but wonder what's become of all those couples that truly loved each other before the female oppressors took over.
I would also like to see what the dynamic is between the mares at the farm.
I would love to visit Fluttershy's farm with a videocamera. All those mares being given a sexual tour of Equestria and beyond sounds amazing to watch.
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I'm sure there's a canon story about it somewhere.