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Aw fuck yeah, you continued!
Will read in just a moment.
I read it all in one sitting!
I was starting to wonder if this had been dropped. Good to see it wasn't.
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Well I am glad you enjoyed it.
Haha awesome! Glad to see you are still updating this story, fuck those stupid dislikes, they didn't even give this story a chance! keep at it bro!!!
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Thank you for your support. I'm familiar with unjustified down voting from my other story and have no intention to stop writing either that story or this one simply because someone feels that the material I chose to write about doesn't fit their idea what a good story should be.
I'm fucking lovin' this.
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oh ! Schorl Tourmaline please continue
Love it, really nice
Is it bad that I like this story better than EQTS? Miss Tourmaline, I'd much rather you update this story!
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Well if you like this story better there is nothing wrong with that, but I have to let you know that even if I wrote out the complete story in a month there is still a process to these chapters where it will take a while to get each chapter out.
The only reason EqTS is able to come out weekly is because I have full control over the story and thus can release it when I choose to. I really wouldn't expect a chapter of this story to come out but once a month, every three weeks if you are lucky.
4869269 I can wait
I don't know if I should feel really fucked up about reading this, I'm just waiting for some kind of fight out of AJ.
I find it impressive that this made me sick to myself. I am not saying it's bad, no, not at all. This is really well made. It's not technically, well, pleasure-inducing to me, but it's very interesting. It takes a lot of creativity to make such abuse into text. I'm sure some people like this sexually. I personally am in the middle, given this was a bit on the heavy side of FoE, but I digress. Good job on the writing. You capture one of the main reasons I follow Fall of Equestria. Not for the basic porn, but to portray the actual abuse and pain of this sexist and sex-consumed world. Cheers.
As soon as I read the color order it made me think of how Twi, AJ, Dash, Pinkie and Flutters would be in the sack
God damn, poor AJ. This fic has got some of my fetishes in it, but at the same time, I feel terrible for the characters. What a strange mixture of arousal and sadness.
Well I came back and reread this one again, and damn to I feel bad for Rarity. Probably the only one of the Mane Six to fall so far to be essentially rescued trash.
Not the worst thing I've read. And I use that term by forcing myself to read due to ho F'ed up it is. Didn't have to do that. But I don't think I have it in me to read another chapter again for a while.
It's still fucked up. And you need to advertise that much, much more clearly.
I loved this story.
Came recently to fimfiction.net and with great works like this I am extremely glad I did.
I love how twisted and dark Fall of Equestria can be and yet how familiar the characters seem even in this setting.
Having Flim Flam break AJ seems the perfect match. Loving it
If Applejack feels that way about Rarity and Twilight, how does she feel about Cadence or Celestia?
Also, will we ever find out more in depth what happened to Rarity since the start of the fall?
Great story, but exactly which part of "brainwashed" does AJ not understand? Or does no pony know about the spell? Again, still great.
More likely, some being(s) elsewhere in the world took over their rising and setting and King Dainn just attributed it to be natural. The reason I bring this up is that I find it very difficult to believe that ponies like Celestia or Luna or the ancient Unicorn Tribe would have had even developed the ability/duty of raising and lowering the sun and moon if they naturally rose on their own. While this is personal headcannon, I've been of the opinion that the sun and moon don't have a natural orbit (or if they once did it has been damaged to the point of needing assistance) have been raised and lowered by numerous beings throughout history, and Celestia and Luna are just the latest to do so.
Here's another plot hole, if you go with this theory: when King Dain, bastard that he is, likely dehorned Celestia and Luna, he should have doomed all life on one side of the planet to freeze to death and the other side to burn/transform into arid deserts under a never ending sun, with maybe a thin strip of land around the Equator still habitable. I would say other beings might have risen up to move the moon and sun, but no FoE story ever made that clear, and Equestria's sun and moon having a natural cycle just flat out doesn't make sense if other beings have moved them for all of recorded history.
Also, thanks for the warning about the clop. FoE is decidedly not erotic to me, and I've only read it because...I honestly don't know. This was the first one I've enjoyed for more than one chapter. I suppose I keep giving them a chance when they pop up because, despite everything else, a world where the bad guys won irrefutably is rather interesting and filled with potential of how the characters deal with it. Now if only it wasn't used for god damn rape fantasies and we'd have an interesting series.
Dang this is fucked up and sad just how much this new world is dehumanizing mares.
Time for the Caroleans to make a comeback