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Poor Mac
Well, im still hooked for whats next! amazing writing dude!
Aaaaaaand NCN is butthurt.
That's one explanation I want to see.
My bet would've been on Applejack having lost conscience during her rape and this being her dream, except for, as 7412373 noted, this apparently turning into a real fight between actual people.
As it is, I have no idea. If I were NCN, I would've waited. Now I don't see how this won't turn into a revenge fic if it wasn't before.
I'm... very unhappy right now. Is this really what we've come to?
7412534
I don't know if I can enjoy anything here when there's this much potential real life baggage behind it. You do realise Schorl just got booted from the FoE group, no?
7412580
It's great if it works for you. I'm being totally honest with that. Me, I'm just left wondering if this turned into one big potshot. And it's going to be on my mind whenever I look back.
Still got my fingers crossed this isn't what it looks like, but I'm not exactly hoping.
Bruised apples is the single greatest Canon Foe story :3
Its been one heck of a ride, reading something so well written, so full of interesting ideas and interpritations of the canon. An Author making something exciting and intense. After reading those last two chapters I feel like I need a Cigarette it was so good ^^
I can't wait to read more Foe stories from Schorl to me they are the story master ^^
Question mark.
*things
*not to
A? Or some? Take your pick.
*Never mind,
Flip that apostrophe.
Awkward. Try:
Well this is a complete turn around. Not the way I thought this fic was heading, but good job. I can't wait to see how this all ends!
7412549 They got booted out of the main group? For what?
Wow. It does kind of feel like this has turned into some sort of revenge fic, which isn't really what I wanted to see... but on the other hand, it also involves someone finally kicking the caribou in the nuts and shattering that stupid Omni-powerful crystal heart, which is EXACTLY what I want to see.
For a fic about Applejack's attempt to get a red collar, the sudden rejection of that concept and then shift to regicide and then rebellion kind of comes out of the blue. Everything escalated absurdly quickly, and the way every. single. thing. goes wrong for the caribou in this finale is kind of silly.
But you know what? The entire premise for how the caribou conquered Equestria in the first place was pretty silly to begin with. They've had so much handwavium and plot armor for so long, this at least has some justification in that it's all coming back to bite them in the ass.
I kind of wish it weren't ALL so neat and tidy. It's basically a Post-Fall dream come true; the only way it could have fit in more Post-Fall tropes is if it were Luna cracking Dainn's nuts and absorbing the crystal heart instead of the apple siblings.
But it's clear that real effort went into making this at least sorta-kinda realistic, and it finally provides the one, big thing that FoE canon stories never do: Catharsis. As much as I enjoy the FoE world, the way everything is implied to end horribly for all our favorite characters, forever, is almost too much for me to bear at times.
I don't care if NCN doesn't consider Bruised Apples canon. It's canon in my book. It's the most canon-damned thing I've ever seen.
...Now maybe I'll no longer feel urges to write a Post-Fall story myself where there's actual hope for our favorite characters. I appreciate that.
7412549
They booted the only decent writer in a group where the rest of the fics are full of Edgy villain Sues and idiotic protagonists with dialogs and a "canon world" that seems written by virgins?
Just lmao...
And why do you care so much about it regarding the quality of this story? This is the only shining light of the group, if anything they should be glad to be separated from the rest.
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Apparently, this is no longer be canon as Schorl and Bruised Apples have been kicked out from the group; so me hears. This might be a case of "real life writes the plot", but who knows. Story just got more interesting.
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Maybe because there are some folks involved I actually give a crap about. Hilarious, isn't it? Caring about folks! What an idiotic notion.
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7413094
There's a group for fics that have the Caribou be defeated. It's Post-Fall. It was created as a group specifically for the purpose of hosting, discussing, and creating them, unlike the actual FoE group. If the latest chapters are genuine and not part of a bait-and-switch, this just turned into a Post-Fall story with no forewarning.
Think of it like a promised Spike/Rarity story, tagged as a Spike/Rarity story, written for a Spike/Rarity fan group for a Spike/Rarity universe (complete with OC kids) created by a Spike/Rarity fan that suddenly has Spike knife Rarity, burn down her boutique, and undergo sex change surgery so he can marry King Sombra.
It's a little bewildering.
Now, I've never been a fan of just kicking people out. Never made a secret of that. I understand the reasoning but don't agree, never have.
In the end, I guess... I just would've liked to know what's going on.
7413376
And? That doesn't mean you can't enjoy the story.
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That doesn't make sense. Afaik post fall stuff is solely focused on taking them down. Here 90% of the story is FoE, the BEST of what little could be taken from it , and because it seems that the author wish to close it on a relatively positive note, it's shunned?
Same for your example. If a 150 000 words long Rarispike story ends with a final chapter with all those shitty twists... it's still a RariSpike story. With a shitty ending for sure, but still a Rarispike story nonetheless.
Although I myself thoroughly enjoyed these chapters, and if this so tight knit "group" thinks it's "tainted" because of those after over 250 000 words, well it just show how delusional they are to not see some of the obvious flaws of the medium.
7413509
Not when it looks like it's become a vehicle for taking shots at each other. That is a much greater "taint", as you put it, at least to me. Because I do care, and that may be a personal flaw but it's not something I can just stop.
Well, there's also some personal reasons, I will admit. My apologies, but I'm not going to explain what, please just accept that it's bothering me and will until we (as in all readers) have closure.
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Alright.
7413548
Thank you.
And sorry for having been a bit snappy at the start.
I wish, with everything I am and will ever be, that this will not be undone.
Schorl, you're a brave, awesome person to have written this fic.
It's not only incredible, it's ending in the way I had always hoped.
While I like FoE, what I've always despised is the insistence upon the utter invincibility of the Caribou, despite their doing, as is very well explained in these last two chapters, literally everything they can to destroy the country they've conquered.
Seriously, the Caribou as a species have just been big ridiculous Mary Sues for so long that FoE has become a joke because of it, and what Schorl has done here is finally bringing some real development to the universe. She's actually moving it forward, rather than leaving it mired in "Teh Cariboo are teh best evar and win everyteim." forever and ever and ever.
If any of you LIKED that, well.. congratulations, you've got no beef with repetition, but SOME people enjoy a little change every now and then.
Godspeed, Schorl!
Forget where this was but I think it was in this chapter or the last. Sorry for not finding it but this chapters are long and it took me about 2 hours to read both
During the vault scene, I was listening to this on loop, and it really fit with it.
7412940 Its not canon anymore. NCN confirmed that.
Gunne.
He's right, even Phoenix Wright wouldn't be able to get you out of this one, there ain't gonna be no convincing this judge.
She probably knows some form of self defense, and she can literally crush bones with a kick.
Of course.
I understood that reference.
7414211
A shame, because this is hands down the best FoE story by a considerable margin.
It has taken an extreme fetish setting with no other purpose than to create porn and moulded it into something so much more. Honestly, I doubt that another FoE story will be written that can be compared favourably to Bruised Apples, let alone match up to or exceed its greatness.
EDIT: I just finished reading the final "chapter" and I guess I'll have to retract that last statement. It's a shame, though, that as far as I can tell right now those stories will only be coming from one author.
I do hope you aren't finished with this, I'd like to see the next few chapters. This story is literally the only reason I joined the group. It's well thought out and as even if the premise isn't realistic, the characterization is.
I do hope you redeem Twilight and poor Spike. Thank you, for this story.
7413094 apparently NCN is more than a bit of a control freak about his 'cannon world', going by what i read last night in the explanation chapter, seemingly obsessed with the Caribou keeping up the 'untouchable' act and refusing to apply logic or even reason to 'his' world and characters, something that is apparently a problem with a lot of cannon writers for FoE. read her reasons for writing the story the way she did and how her ideas for development of the cannon to move it forward were controlled by NCN, and u will start to understand.
I can not believe that no one has brought up the fact that Mac just got infused with the magic from the Crystal Cock. The powerful magic that spread through all of Equestria and brainwashed just about every stallion in the country, and which was also hinted at having been used on Twilight and Cadance.
Even if he's immune there has to be some consequences. What happens if there is leakage? Every Stallion who gets within a certain distance of Mac reverts to his rape version. Every female is overcome with lust and the desire to be the perfect red-collar.
Mac either has to become a hermit, or have very understanding friends.
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or maybe with the power of Irony, the mac changes the corrupted invading him, so with any caribou or actual traitor he comes in contact with, will become people who believe equal rights for females (stupid, yes. but it be kinda funny to me)