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Nice!
So how does that "dirt pony" thing work? Is it exclusively females who are dirt ponies? Its usually directed at earth ponies but then why would Mac be using it as an earth pony? It has always slightly puzzled me, whether or not the caribou actually dislike earth ponies or just use racial abuse to try and humiliate mares, the most disobedient of who seem to be earth ponies.
Good thing Noteworthy didn't get his way. Actually as Big Mac is in charge of pretty much all food production he should try assert that fact on his benefit more often. Now it took a caribou to end the situation by addressing the importance of the Apple farm production, but it could be a goal worth pursuing for Big Mac to gain such authority as well. If everyone in Ponyville knows you don't fuck with the farm, it'll be easier and safer, at least during the work season.
Nice to see Cheerilee too in this story. I was wondering if she was going to show up as she was in the picture.
Interesting chapter. I love getting into Mac's head and getting to know his mind. It is also a little saddening that this sort of situation is one of the very few that allow Mac to be a more outspoken character, since he cannot rely on his sister or any of the other mares to speak for him. I loved the scene of him and Cheerilee where he saw himself as a little rebel by exploiting the system. But as far as clop goes, the previous chapters were better, but then again we got a whole lot more of story in this one and I got a good chuckle out of Noteworthy being put in his place.
So sad.
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The dirt pony thing is more of a separation of gender through degradation. A male earth pony will let a female know that they dirt because unlike a pegasus or a unicorn they never had special talents and are less sought after for how mundane they are. It does raise a question of whether males would see this as a slight if a pegasus or a unicorn called an earth mare that, since like it or not a female of your race is a representative of it, but I believe any animosity from it would only be on a subconscious level for those fully corrupted.
What? Who is ti....
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thank you, fixed
Why do I have a feeling this is a trap. The caribou is going to watch him to see if he's really a sympathizer.
Dude, Spike runs the town?? Are you gonna turn him into an asshole, too? I don't think I can bare that.
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Spike, in FoE cannon, has grown to a point of maturity that he has become sexually active and sees most mares as things to relieve himself with. He actually owns many a mare and is essentially the one who controls Ponyville in the fall universe, though as stated he is not quite at a point to make leadership decisions so he needs a bit of help.
will we see RD in there?
Yay!! An update!! I am really hoping at some point to see a chapter with King Dainn, Celestia, and Luna.
I just realized
Whatever happened to Apple Bloom and Granny Smith?
4962289 Granny Smith is implied to be dead, and her ashes stored inside the house. Fimfiction doesn't allow fillies and colts in erotic stories, so it's likely they won't be mentioned in the story.
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While you are right that Applebloom will not be appearing because of the rules of Fimfiction, I will say that Granny Smith is still alive. What happened to her will be brought up next chapter.
4965233 I'm sure our delicious imagination can take care of Applebloom where your writing can not.
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4965233 I didn't mean bloom should explicitly be in the story, but a vague explanation of what happens to the young and old would be interesting
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If you really care, look up the fall of Equestria images. Aside from that I would rather not explain, as it is a bit obvious and I don't enjoy that sort of content myself.
4966109 no big deal, just curious is all! Great story ^^'
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Thank you, I appreciate the compliment.
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Seems to be heading this way...
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IT's still my question though, is Spike more like Mac, where he's trying to get his mares a lick of dignity, or is he a lot like Noteworthy and Caramel? Understanding that he still has a lot to learn about running a town like Mayor Mare was, I can get that---he have to have advisors.
I think it would be pretty cool that it looks like Spike is a little sympathetic to the mares like Mac and Cheerilee. They are all rebels, and they happen to be in positions of power.
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Oh, I thought I was clear, but looking back I can see that my reply was a bit vague. Spike is indeed corrupted in the FoE series, and he is perhaps one of to worst males a mare could be under. Not necessarily because he is a sadist, but simply that he is a bit of a brute and unless you like it rough you're in for a ride when the dragon chooses you as his next sexual partner.
One of the few times I'd root for a caribou. At least these fuckers follow their laws.
Applejack on the other hand was struggling to slip out of her bonds to try to save the the stallion. She had just expected the warbeast to give the stallion a fright, not go completely berserk. No matter how hard she tried though she couldn't escape them. Mac had bound her far too tightly to break free.
Something seems to be off about that scene... where's Carrot Top? Wasn't she "attached" to AJ before the whole thing even started? We only hear from her after the whole thing is over with.
"Well I do have a mare at home, but her bitch ass isn't nearly as nice as this one's." Caramel said, sending a smack across her flank.
Was Caramel talking about Sassaflash when he said that he had a mare at home?
http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Sassaflash
Ten years later...
"King Dain!" Herald, a scholar called
Dain looked up from the nameless mare impalced on his rod. "Yes?"
"I have terrible news! In my research, I have found that In the past ten years, birth rates have dropped by 95%. Ponies and the Caribou species will die in fifty years if this is not rectified!"
"How can this be? We're dominating and humiliating the sluts like nature ordains!" Dain roared, shoving the mare off.
"Well, that's the problem my lord. As it turns out, subjecting mares of breeding age to daily horrible treatment, rape, humiliation, mind break, beatings, abuse, and outright torture causes enormous amounts of stress hormones to be released that lower fertility and will eventually destroys the female ability to bare young."
"So, you're saying that our way that I gloriously shoved down everyone's throat is killing our species and others," Dain questioned.
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"Um, yes?"
"KILL THE HERETIC!" Dain roared.
Dain would continue to ignore such reports for the next thirty years. It finally occurred to him at the ripe age of eighty-five and years since he'd had a boner that he had not seen anyone over the age of forty in years and that maybe he'd been wrong. It was pointless, as the griffons invaded later that year, slaughtered the elderly caribou and rescued what few surviving pony populations in hiding remained. And Dain went down in history as the moron who doomed his own people to extinction
Okay,I was joking in a previous comment about Ponyville starving because of ridiculous bondage equipment, but after after seeing the stuff the mares have to wear while working, I'm now convinced Ponyville should be starving or will be soon. How the fucking hell can any significant amount of work get done whether it's farm work or deliveries. Hell, I cannot imagine a nation being managed effectively at all if the government is so obsessed with degrading women that it forces stallions to do this insane amount of paperwork documenting it, not to even mention the huge amount of resources and time they spend enforcing it.
Hell, this might be a reason for the fall of the caribou. They were so obsessed with documenting women humiliation and abuse that they neglected other things, like proper infrastructure maintenance and making sure buildings are strong enough to not collapse on their heads or that water is contaminated with shit to prevent that little annoying thing called disease.
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ehhmm... you have a good point
I wonder what happened to Applebloom. I can only assume Mac lost custody/ownership of her to some other stallion who's likely using her in horrible ways, physically and sexually I assume and there's nothing he can do to help her. Poor guy, being forced to follow these rules, his elder sister barely under his own watch as techically his sex slave and his youngest one likely under the ownership of a sick stallion.
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That is what I'm wondering, I understand that Applebloom is not in the story (alongside Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle, Rumble, her Mash, and any other children) because of her age but I'm really curious as to what happened to her. A brief mentioning or non-sexual flashback would be nice just so we know for sure. But then again, that does add to the mystery and fear of the situation, not knowing what is truly going on with these characters let's our minds do the work of trying to figure it out.