Lemon Square is the filly known by her reputation; 'The Loner Pony '. She battles bullies; Fears; and a want of friends in The Trouble With Lemon.
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Akio-nya
I love MLP and i have a blog for my oc Lemon Square
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I'm sorry, but Twilight is way OCC for me.
I award this chapter muffinat out of muffinator
Cute. But you should start by practicing to seperate your characters thoughts and speeches.
For example, you have Spike and Twilight speaking in one paragraph AND Lemon narrating for us.
I'm too tired to comment or offer any help at this time, aside from this, but I'm sure you can figure this out for yourself and help future potential readers to enjoy their read a bit more.
Good luck in your story.
dat giant mass of emptiness at the end.
Why Twilight have to watch over some random orphan ?
Why this orphan is not in an orphanage ?
Why Twilight act like a slaver ?
Why Spike act like a jerk ?
Why this random orphan can teleport when NO ONE in the show except Twilight is shown doing it ( and only after she managed to beat NM ) ?
Why this orphan is Lemon-themed but still able to do unbelievable feat of magic without any common ground with the general theme of the character ?
Since when this random orphan live in Ponyville and with Twilight ?
Why Fluttershy act like a confident pony ?
Since when the Cakes know this random orphan ?
4069793 Just read the story and hold your tongue if you don't have anything nice to say.
4088412 If you're supposed to be a brony, aren't you supposed to believe in love and tolerance instead of being obnoxious to others?
4098446 Are you even a full-fledged brony?
4103893 I never said it was a "philosophical requirement" but it wouldn't kill you to be polite. And by the way. You are possibly the most hateful person I have ever met. It takes a coward to be a bully. But it takes a real coward like you to be a cyberbully. I don't know what happened to you that made you this way but think about this for a second.
Life is so brief, we are only on this Earth for such a limited time, and we never get any of these moments back. You have decided to waste yours trying to make yourself feel better by insulting not only me, but bronies everywhere. You also wasted your own time making an account for a site dedicated to a fandom you seem to hate. I have decided to take my time to stand up to you for not only myself, but everyone who has been bullied by the likes of you. Good day to you whoever you are. May you find happiness in the choices you've made
4073633 I love your Red Letter Media Mr. Plinkett style questions, even though they're true I can't stop reading them in his voice.
4106542 Fight me IRL bro, come at me!
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*gasps* How dare you... *Slaps back*
4106831 Oh that is it! The gloves are coming off now! *Takes off a white glove and hits you with it*
This is stupid. Your only proving how much immaturity you actually have. Grow up and move on. Ive edited chapter 1 to address a lot of the questions and comments. There's no point in making a big deal out of it. If you can't leave a positive comment don't bother commenting. No one said you had to read this. If you truly do not like this story then you can read someone else's and leave mine alone. All this drama for a little story. Totally not worth it.
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*Walks away*