I love to be surprised by stories. Especially my own.
Rainbow Dash has worked at her job for many years now. She has finally decided to retire to spend more time with her wife, Twilight Sparkle. But on the eve of her retirement, news arrives that changes everything. Determined to say goodbye to all of her friends, she enjoys one last day with her family.
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Good story! So sad!
I know Dash is quite the tomboy, but I still think it was odd for her to be called "Daddy". Oh well. Good work :)
I actually based that on a same sex couple (male) that i know in real life. Thier kid calls one of them mommy, just to tell them apart I guess.
R.I.P. Rainbow Dash...
This story made me cry. It's a very rare story that makes me cry.
Many tears were shed.
Alright, not a bad story, certainly very emotional, but could do with some slight flow re-wording.
Other than that, you get a plus 5 on the awesome meter for including "Do not go gentle into that good night", one of my all time favourite poems. And Prims sounds a lot like Sherlock from Sherlock, or Sherlock from Elementary. not sure which one you were going for, or if you just went for the original Sherlock Holmes, but either way it was well done and you didn't shove the resemblance in our faces.
Oh, at it saddens me to see that this has not had any comments for 76 weeks, so allow me to remedy that.
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Thank you for the comment. I actually wrote this before I saw the British Sherlock, so I was just working off of the original. And as for the flow, I wrote this back before I had much practice writing, so maybe I'll re-write this someday.
I really need to quit reading these.
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What do you mean?
3332545 The sad stories, they make me cry and dredge up old memories but most of them are just so well written! Why as a fandom are we best at making each other cry?
kinda half in half with this. on one hand, a shortened life can be a traumatic thing. some diseases can't be cured.
on the other hand, its a world where a dragon the size of a puppy can turn to the size of a whale in the span of fourty eight hours. magic makes it that even cancers can well be mundane if trying.
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I am crying right now . This is just so sad .
Damn that ending hit me hard. Mainly because of the relationship with my dad when he left. I'm just glad the git is out of my life!
Great story BTW!
This one struck a chord with me, that’s for sure. But not really reducing me to tears. Still, it is an awesome story and I really think that this shoulc be tagged tragedy....
Because that fatal disease thing reminded me of a memory I’d rather not think of..