Pinkie Pie Party Times

by Xx soul sorrow xX

The Last Party

It was all set up. The streamers and the stream and the ballons and some other stuff was all pink and set up right. It was Pinkies big night and they weere gonna have a great time even though Pinki still missed Carmal so much so bad. But she shoved her feelings deep inside her where no one could ever see them emerge ever.

Anyway it was a great party except no one showed up. Pinkie sat there crying as a dead balloon floats by. But finaly, the mysteryous lady came! he was wearing a cloak and it was cool. Her husband wAs there and he looked like he was from washigton dc. He wore a tie and a breefcase. His cuti mark was a dollar sign with some stars. Anyway they dance to gether and Pinki was kind of happy.

But, then the husbinds tie fell off. "Oops" said the guy. He picked it up but it wouldnt stick back on so he threwed it away. Then he lost his brifcase and Pinkie pie seen his cutie mark peel off. Omgomg it was a sticker! The cloak lady ran away and Pinkie screamed because it was Carmal! "Carammil I didnt see you in a while!" said pinkie.

"Uhyeah" said Caramel and he runned away and Pinkie sat crying and sad.

Now she had even more depressed and she cryed forever until she cryed her self to slep and she died in her sleep but she cryed.

Comments

[Manes]

Dat cover image.

[Xx soul sorrow xX]

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yeah hhaha im getting a lot better at drawin heres my first art from december
sadpanda.us/images/1877147-27BYKKR.jpg

[Backslash]

Loved it? Dont know how but i liked it hmm now to go get a sanity chack(it was a good story liked it didn't love it upvoted )

[Ara]

A truly moving tale of loss and redemption.

[The Gardenhead]

3935634 Okay dude be honest with me. Are you trolling? Because I think your trolling

[Ara]

3954659 People on here use that word to mean things I don't think it means. I legitimately enjoy these stories, and to me it's pretty obvious that a lot of things about them that I enjoy are intentionally crafted.

[The Gardenhead]

3959459 Oh. So like me you just read them to make fun of them like I do.

[Ara]

3959466 I don't know how you could get that from what I said.

[The Gardenhead]

3959550 So you don't make fun of them. Well what do you like about them?

[Ara]

3959561 Like, a lot of the stories are obviously intentionally crafted. I don't remember if this one does it, but there are points where a first person narrator literally steps out behind scenery and does stuff. The actual narratives themselves are often pretty hilarious, and it's pretty clear that most people reading the stories are not giving the author enough credit for choices they are clearly making.

[Aila]

Wow. First fic where you have more likes than dislikes. ... wii. Small step for writer but a big step for... well, I don't know, nothing?

[Aila]

Try to use this editor:

http://www.reverso.net/spell-checker/english-spelling-grammar/

I tried it and it works fine. Try it.

[Weird Autistic Weeaboo]

Uhh... You're Trolling right? You gotta be Trolling! This is a Trollfic! I Know it! You can't make a ''Fanfiction'' like this so Horribble On Purpose! I mean C'Mon... The spelling is... Awkward, The Chapters are too Short, and I Dont like the Ending, actually I Don't like this ''Fanfiction'' at all! There is no way this ''Fanfiction'' is meant to be Serious, or Is it? God please no...

[Xx soul sorrow xX]

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You Don't Need to Capitalize Almost every Word, your not That Important.

[Weird Autistic Weeaboo]

4061496 No offense Man, I'm Just saying.

[Discorded]

I cri evri tiem

[Night_Wisp]

4213951 I kno me two maen!Themm fells!

[Normal]

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Psssst, if you liked this would you mind checking out some of my stories~?

[Ara]

4250265
Maybe I will

[StarPiece]

So they danced and Pinkie said "Yeah Caramel if we get married you can be Caramel Pie yeeeah."
But Caramell said "No Pinkie I don't wanna get married I wanna be wild and free."
But Pinkie cryed and she said "No Caramell I wanna marry you forever."
But Carmel said he's sorry and there were tears in his eye and he wandered off forever. Pinkie never saw him again and she was sad.

Liek dis if u cri evri tiem

(psst spoilerz!!1111!)

[Sauron]

So bad it's good. -2563/2563 would read again.

[Xx soul sorrow xX]

4939077 OK

[Penguin Lagann]

Can't even remember her cutie mark?

What the ****.

[maddiecunta]

Both chapter were hilarious!!! I love how you intentionally misspelled, like, 70% of the story!XD Although, I didn't like how she died in her sleep....