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No sleep for me and as you going o do this to the eps or completely different.
New chapter, yay!
My shit-storm sense is tingling
also first
After such a long wait this was a very nice little surprise to find when I checked here, good job and hope to see more of these in the future though maybe with a bit more to nibble on. If you don't mind that is....
You write quite the chapter, my friend. The only thing I didn't like was that it wasn't about 20000 words longer, but thats just me. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Anyway, the explanation about why monsters keep coming after Twilight suddenly makes sense, and Discord showing up is completely boss. Anyway, hope to see the next one soon!
so... when is twi going to realize that the pony she fucked up is in the same room with her...
Moar!!!!!! anyway so cats out of the bag and all the main six know whats going on now between each other and what they are. so now the questions are what will celestias reaction to twi's condition and how are they going to take down the mad musician. and how much trouble luna's going to be in when celly finds out about the dreadful condition of the elements of harmony?
AHHHHHHHHHH!
my god... I can't even call it pacing issues... it's just at the end there the waterworks and dramatics happened way too fast. you could squeeze in a bit of detail there to make it go much smoother without feeling a bit rushed... either way I still love this story, one of my all times favorites
That ending! It's so sad!
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VEGETA! How many feels are in this chapter?!
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I just cried my face....
I see you extended the previous chapter and posted this new one, I hope this is complete and I don't have to go back to read this one before I have to read the next to avoid discrepancies with what I did know of this fic.
I wonder if Nurse Triagie will eventually know about the conditions of the Mane 6 and becomes their Medical Support, I am still waiting for Pinkie Chowing down the N00b of a partner she have, and if he's sharin recovery room with Pinkie.
ON a serious matters: A serious Discord is actually a sing to worry, This Crimson Sonata Character by the way Discord describe him would be like a mix between The Jocker and Bane... only obsesed with see the world burn in caos, destruction, war and death, It's better that the Mane 6 steps up to their game and get some serious battle armor and weaponry, because a storm is coming.
So far, the scores are this:
Twilight: Dominant Original Moonblessed
Rariry: Submisive(To Twilight) Original Moonblessed
Applejack: Normal support donnor(Althought to be fair, I would like her to be a WereTimberWolf)
Rainbow Dash: Normal support donnor
Pinkie Pie: Sunblessed (not specified)
Fluttershy/Abia: Changeling Princess(Or Queen if looked correctly, even if she was exiled)
Derpy: UNKNOWN
Berry Punch: Town's Therapist hidden as Town's Drunkard (Lol I have the suspicion that she will help the Mane 6 more frecuently like she did withTwilight more frecuently than any of us readers we can think)
Zecora: Local Shaman, Will Teach Twilight about Dark Magic and some forms of combat
Nurse Triage: Expected to be Medical Support
And I do still Expect some cool epic armor for the now Extaordinary Leage-I mean Mane 6
Twilight Sparkle: Elite Lunar Personal Guard Battle Armor and whatever outfit desinged by Rarity
Rarity: Elite Lunar Personal Guard Battle Armor and whatever outfit she will come up to desing
Pinkie Pie: Elite Celestial Personal Guard Battle Armor and Whatever outfit desinged by Rarity
Fluttershy/Abia: Changeling Royal Battle Armor (Actually is a Custom Armor specially designed by and made for Fluttershy/Abia for aditional Protection since Changelings never wear armor relaying on their exoskeletons) and Whatever Outfit desingned by Rarity
Applejack: Custom Earth Pony Heavy Battle Armor(no faction alegacy), Timberwolf Natural Full Body Armor(If Prooven to be a WereTimberWolf) and whatever outfit desinged
Rainbow Dash: Shadowbolt Flight suit(Even with that she will want to join the Wonderbolts), Customized traditional Pegasian Empire Centurion Battle Armor(See Commander Hurricane Battle Armor) and whatever outfit desinged by Rarity.
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So let's see... vampony rarity and twilight, sunblessed pinkie, changeling fluttershy... are RD and AJ the only normal ponies left, or are they wonky somehow too?
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Woah woah, leave the wolves it of this, my brother died that way.
Uh is the vampony her based off of a good vampire novel such a Hellsing or the Jackman movie Van Helsing? Or something .... like True Blood and *bile rises* Twilight (not the pony)
when I saw the update, I made a noise that was several octaves higher than I thought I was capable of producing, much to the displeasure of my dad, who was sitting a little less than a foot away from me.
Awesometacular.
Ooh new chapter! I'm really looking forward to a conversation between Twi and Pinkie's partner...
Needs alerts to chapter changes.
1015577 New avatar I see. On another note, WHAT ANIME IS THAT?! It looks hilarious!!
1015671 Eaten by weretimberwolves? HIGHLY UNLIKELY!!!
1015763 Not sure. I shamelessly steal GIFs anywhere I find them that I like, so... I know someone else told me once, but I dun remember. Memory never WAS my strong suit...
925259 Only problem I can see with that pic is they've got Rainbow's tail growing out of her ass now.
It's supposed to be above it instead.
It looks like she's ****ing a tail.
Yes, Yes, Yes, Yes, Yes, Yes, Yes, Yes!
I love this story. The feels, the Moon/Sunblessed, the Changelings, the exploding hydra heads, its all so, awesome!
Oh good, from the comments I wasn't the only one who didn't recall a hydra attack and was a little lost at the start of this chapter. I was worried for a moment there. Good update and keep it rolling. I'm enjoying this story and can't wait to see Mane 6/Luna's Band of Heroes take on future monsters.
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The anime is Durarara!
Damn I would never expect that from Fluttershy
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pretty much the same thing when i woke up this morning and saw the following:
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although i'm stealing that .gif, that made my day.
This fic has so much awesome.... can't wait for next update
I like how you redid things last chapter to lead into this one, but now I'm waiting for them to meet Zecora, again.
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She knows and placed a silence barrier around their bed.
This fucking story.
Worth the wait?
Yes.
Do I wanna wait?
Hell no.
Am I gonna have to wait?
Probably.
Am I gonna break into your house and force you to write the next chapter at gunpoint?
What?! Are you insane?!
Yes. Yes I am.
One trip to an unmarked grave later....
>Sees this.
>MFW
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I have only two questions:
1. Why have Twilight and Rarity as vamponies mirror images?
2. And if they don´t have, why is Rarity still sane?
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Ano.. its probably one of those myths that were not true, or something that was blown out of proportion with one of the skills that the moonblessed had... after all they probably did some unsavory stuff.. and probably sneaking and whatnot.. defeats the point if they had a reflection while sneaking.. so maybe that was a skill that was given to them, and when the ponys tried to recreate the effect of the blessing, the no reflection skill was involuntary and permanant? and if that wasnt the case.. maybe it can be now -giggles-
good chapter cant wait for the next
Hey, author, do you have a schedule you update this to, or do you just update whenever?
So, two vamponies, and a Changeling royal (princess? Queen? However that works.) Oh, and NMM is trying to turn over a new leaf by living in Twilight's head and Discord is already toying as much as he can.
And we haven't even gotten to "The Ticket Master" yet.
Celestia is going to FREAK when this shitstorm- No, sorry, that doesn't do it justice. When this epic maelstrom of total fecal distribution hits the fan, Celly is probably going to go just a wee bit unglued. Either that or she reveals it's all part of her Grand Master Plan that she put into place over 2,000 years ago after defeating Discord and realizing the spells that hold him would eventually fail. Everything, Luna going nuts, Nightmare Moon, vamponies, sunblessed, even the intervention of the Changelings and Discord's return... All part of her plan.
Because she is the motherfuckin' bawss. And she has it all planned out three steps ahead of you.
1016741 You know... I think that's giving Celestia a little too much credit. I mean, sure, she had Twilight make friends as part of a gambit to defeat Nightmare Moon, but she didn't seem to realize Discord was breaking free until it was too late. Nor did she have a clue about the Changelings.
Anyway, while short and bittersweet, this is still a good chapter, and a nice break from the random monster attacks.
By the by, are you accepting OCs for this fic? Because I have one that I think would fit in perfectly.
1016264 Pfft, go right ahead. I stole it from somepony else anyhoof. xD
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
so anyway keep it up
1016724 For the most part, I get a new chapter about every week or two (I'm counting the ch 12 rewrite as a new chapter), and then it takes me a few days to edit.
1016800 SO DO I. And I think the lack of canon in this destroys any theoretical character analysis entirely. SO SHUT YOUR MOUTH.
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They have reflections; see chapter one again.
1017127 Now, now, no need to yell. While most of the characters have been changed for the sake of the story, we have yet to see evidence that Celestia has been as well. Granted, once she learns of recent events in Ponyville, she'll probably have to adjust.
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I didn´t asked if they have, but why
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I swear.. I love that pick! Goona steal it for soem of my other sad stories to post! And dont you do it first!
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Because they do in this story. There does not need to be another reason.
“Yes the other staff said that too... say, why are you wearing clothes?” The nurse asked me, looking at my hoodie and pants that were splashed with both the hydra and sunblessed's blood.
WTF?!?! She asked about the clothes before she asked about the blood?! GOOD SNOOPING NURSE, YOU REALLY DID A GOOD JOB.
I was confused a bit during this chapter. I didn't remember reading about the hydra attack, but it looked like I had read all of the chapters up to this point, so I figured that I must have gone to the previous chapter once, gotten distracted, lost the tab, and completely forgotten about it. Reading the comments of this chapter, I take it that you added the hydra attack, and maybe took out the visit to Zecora. Not to seem rude, or demanding, or anything like that, but if you do something like that and change another chapter in the future, do you think that you could please add a short Author's Note to the beginning of the next chapter, notifying readers who read the old version, but not the upgraded version of the chapter, of the change?
Anyway, slight confusion aside, this was still a great chapter. It was a bit on the bitter-sweet side, but that does not detract from the story. I also liked how you included Discord, having him warn Princess Luna, Crescent, and Twilight about the return of an agent of chaos that even in Discord's opinion, takes things too far. I like seeing that Discord was, at one point, a friend to the Princesses, and not just an enemy. This is definitely about to get even more interesting. Like always, I eagerly await the next chapter in this wonderful story.