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OMG HNNG
Also, dat formatting.
that was awesome
An ending italics tag is missing.
And you update shortly before The Night's Favorite Child.
Been waiting for this to update. Also half the paragraph is in italics.
Ceres is Telepathic to?
BOOYAH!!! i've been dieing for this to update
Huzzah, This Story updated! and if THIS story Updated, then your Other Story "Among the Ruins" is not far Behind it!
why is most of it in italic you know just saying its a little unneeded
Ah those italics that cover half the chapter are wonderfull
... Are you okay? Cause most of this is in italics. Plus, there's no distinction during the telepathy scenes.
Update!
Calling it. Crescent plans to give her wings to Twilight so that Twilight can achieve her dream of being able to fly while Crescent becomes able to have a chance at being able to pass herself off as a normal pony.
Also, it seems that Zecora might be a vampony? What a !
One question, what about Crimson Sonata?
this story are always a pleasant surprise, never know when it's gonna update
i think you missed the end of the italics nice chapter tough
Finally an update. Watch those italics tags.
eldritch horrors eh
give anyone ideas
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1710530 I think we'll actually be getting something else, assuming any eldritch horrors are unleashed. After all, SteampunkBrony is full of surprises, like Changelingshy, Paladin Pie, and Crescent Moon.
MUST HAVE MORE.. please hurry. I beg you. I won't lie I will take un edited versions to read that have half the words miss spelled to read this story quicker.
Ah hell yeah
1710566true true... it could happen tho
Two issues. Both towards the end of Twi's first telepathic conversation with Luna.
At one point you have Ceres where it should probably be Cresent.
After that, the end is missing from the text causing the rest of the chapter to be in italics.
ONWARD TO MORE STORY!!!
Bag of Holding huh? Meh whatever, just don't put a Bag of Holding into another Bag of Holding, that's universe shattering shit right there.
Why is it center aligned?
P.S. Glad to see this is back, got worried that it had been forgotten.
Perfection as always.
Eldritch Horrors this and that.
"Oh! Don't go unleashing any Eldritch Horrors now!"
One of these days, it'd be nice to have an "Eldritch Horror" actually come out and be of help to the main characters.
fix your italics tag please, otherwise I am SO GLAD this updated! Please more!
wow so I take it this story is still on SWEEEEEEET
1710678 You seem to forget, most eldritch horrors would think they would be helping us be ending our lives.
I was happy to see this update, although, don't forget to put in quotation marks for speaking or thought. The messages kind of garbled part way through for me.
1710963 You... make a very excellent point.
Still. It would be nice to see one I described at face value.
Update, huzzah!
I think you formatting got messed up a bit. Almost all of it was in italics for me.
Good chapter though!
Hmm.
Replace "life" with "sleep."
The running/jumping scenes from here on out will always remind me of FlowMotion from KH3D.
ALSO,
CHEATER CHEATER CHEATER! The same word twice isn't rhyming!
Well, this is going to be good,Pinkie and Lance are out of the hospital and him is now fulfiting his punishment by helping Fluttershy/Abia to rebuild her home and taking care of her animal friends, Berry is back to her usual happy drinking, Vinyl Scratch made a cameo(I wonder if She's going to be a Moonblessed as well and Inkie "Octavia Philarmonica" Pie besides being a Sunblessed is going to be a Werewolf) Zecora is going to start Twilight's training into the dark arts(Insert "The Spartan Way" level of training soon)
Twilight, Rarity(hopefully in the near future) and Zecora are too careful to do that, however the CMC... they will summon eldritch abominations for the sakes of cutiemarks!
also it looks like Twilight will get her bat-like aliconrn wings very soon the next chapter, I can't wait for the battle armors though
So far, the scores are this:
Twilight: Dominant Original Moonblessed
Rariry: Submisive(To Twilight) Original Moonblessed
Applejack: Normal support donnor(Althought to be fair, I would like her to be a WereTimberWolf)
Rainbow Dash: Normal support donnor
Pinkie Pie: Sunblessed (Paladin)
Fluttershy/Abia: Changeling Princess(Or Queen if looked correctly, even if she was exiled)
Derpy: UNKNOWN
Berry Punch: Town's Therapist hidden as Town's Drunkard (Lol I have the suspicion that she will help the Mane 6 more frecuently like she did withTwilight more frecuently than any of us readers we can think)
Zecora: Local Shaman, Will Teach Twilight about Dark Magic and some forms of combat
Nurse Triage: Expected to be Medical Support in the night shifts
Golden Lance: Sunblessed (Acolyte) Love Donnor Support
And I do still Expect some cool epic armor for the now Extaordinary Leage-I mean Mane 6
Twilight Sparkle: Elite Lunar Personal Guard Battle Armor and whatever outfit desinged by Rarity
Rarity: Elite Lunar Personal Guard Battle Armor and whatever outfit she will come up to desing
Pinkie Pie: Elite Celestial Personal Guard Battle Armor and Whatever outfit desinged by Rarity
Fluttershy/Abia: Changeling Royal Battle Armor (Actually is a Custom Armor specially designed by and made for Fluttershy/Abia for aditional Protection since Changelings never wear armor relaying on their exoskeletons) and Whatever Outfit desingned by Rarity
Applejack: Custom Earth Pony Heavy Battle Armor(no faction alegacy or Cristal Empire Battle Armor), Timberwolf Natural Full Body Armor(If Prooven to be a WereTimberWolf) and whatever outfit desinged
Rainbow Dash: Shadowbolt Flight suit(Even with that she will want to join the Wonderbolts), Customized traditional Pegasian Empire Centurion Battle Armor(See Commander Hurricane Battle Armor) and whatever outfit desinged by Rarity.
GREAT CHAPTER, AND LET'S SEE HOW TWILIGHT WILL DO IN HER TRAINING WITH ZECORA AND CRESENT!!!
That feel when you see a new chapter, begin reading it, and then realize that you've read it already... A week ago. Either way, it was still a good chapter.
1710602
Just remember to keep your bag of holding inside a normal sack to protect it from becoming cursed.
a bag of holding? as opposed to what? a bag of flight? a bag of time travel? how many other types of bags can there be?
Eldritch Horrors??? Oh my.
A great job as usual I have nothing to complain about this is just perfection
Keep up the good work.
oh man I missed this fic!
Read the whole thing in just under three hours. Great job. I love this fic
Moar!!
Yay update! Even if it's far too short for my liking...
Any chance we could get another one in some time less than three months please? I don't mean to sound demanding, but I do love this story and I love reading it.
Pertaining to this chapter, training under Zecora eh? Curious to see where that leads, and what she learns from her, as well as WINGS! Ooh, that'll be a fun part to read through! And I'm VERY curious to see what Celestia's reaction to all of this, if she catches wind, will be. Great job as always!
summoning Eldrich horrors is child's play now taming or putting them back is another story. as for twi... can't wait for the next chapter. cheers
Extinction says GOOD CHAPTER !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sorry... Extinction gets loud when he is happy.
1710602
Actually that would be placing a "Portable Hole" into a Bag of Holding. Or vise versa.
1710678
Need an Eldricht Horror on your side? Have Aquaman summon Cthulhu. He's like 2/8 squid.
1711385 Not sure if this is sarcasm or not. However, a bag of holding a a bag that is significantly bigger on the inside, used in many fantasy scenarios.
awsome chapter to a already awsome story, keep up the awsome work.
New favorite fanfic! I just read through the story start to finish and while I think it's a little too fast paced and randomly loopy, I enjoyed it immensely.
This story is simply so awesome it makes me a huge hypocrite when I say: FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY WRITE MOAR!
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PS: I hate hypocrites...