GOD DAMNIT MAN! you write such awesomeness but so sporadically! this is probably my favorite action fic out there

I've had to kill a rouge timberwolf, a manticore, and I seriously wounded that pegasus, and he might die in the hospital, just to survive.

I swear to Celestia I'm going to hit somebody if I see that mistake again...

its definitely good otherwise though, I always look forward to new chapters

Excellent as usual. And Twilight with the Scottish accent... LMAO

I love that type of accent, so I was sitting here reading it aloud to myself. lol

789195 I knew I was going to miss something, thanks for pointing that out.

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Your welcome , you'd be amazed how many writers I've read from that do that same thing. Its kind of a half and half thing because its somewhat funny in certain instances

Took me a minute to calm down laughing at Berry Punch's summation of Twilight's recent experiences. LOVE IT.

And Twilight's fake accent.

Must resist the urge to spout random encounter joke...

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blame whatever idiot made them spelled so close for that particular mistake. spell check is a pain with words like that.

the stories picture looks badass........... *adds to read later, starts reading now. :P*

....I concede you write a better vampony Twilight than I.....

Okay Awesome chapter and I'm eagerly awaiting the next. One minor thing I would like to point out, you kept saying 'Rouge' timberwolf, rouge is a color, the word you are looking for is Rogue. aside from that nothing I saw was off.

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I just fixed that actually. Blame my damn spellchecker, rouge is before rogue on the list and i must of accidentally clicked rouge.

Nice. Pretty heavy but still nice

789415 noted, but still this is like a a delicious meal to my fic hungry mind

i guess sunny smiles just got back hoofed by night light. aaanyway other news it twi is awsome and is slowly reganing her sanity from the dark abyss it was thrown into by lunas Alt. so anyway ya made me care now i'm waiting on the next chapter so till then cheers

I fucking love this fic!

okay, another good chapter, if just a tad awkward, as per usual(not something I could put my finger on and say "this is the problem with this dialogue", just a general stiffness that is hard to fix, like you went into the conversation with the destination planned but not the path.), but one thing that I just noticed you doing that is simple to fix.

THIS IS A KEY POINT.
Rogue- An unprincipled, deceitful, and unreliable person; a scoundrel or rascal.
Rouge- A red or pink cosmetic for coloring the cheeks or lips.
KNOW THE DIFFERENCE.

This mistake is made so often, I've actually started actively looking for it.

Another awesome chapter. Been waiting for this to update.

Nice to see this story update again. My only real complaint is Twilight asking everypony she meets what she should do. They all basically tell her the same thing, so maybe she has a large enough sample of data to form the correlation, and FOLLOW their advice. Yeah, I get that this is about the hugest change that could happen to her, and she's still in the period of adjustment, but there's only so many times the audience can read essentially the same scene before it becomes old hat. At least she has a large support group now.

Nice job on including Berry Punch, though. I haven't seen her interact with the mane 6 much.

Solid update!

I actually very enjoy the Crescent and Twilight mental byplay.

Looking forward to more updates. Also, my own little nitpick, but the rouge/rogue thing is like a mental speedbump when reading. It throws me off, not sure about others. But you will get it fixed, so it is all good.

Looking forward to more good sir!

Berry could open a counceling office and get a lot of money there,

niche chapter, and awesome story, I like where this is going and hope there is more in the future

789195 My eye twitched a little remember WoW trade chat and how to this day rogue is misspelled.

Berry is best erudite town drunk, hooves down. Also crescent's comments on the blades were hilarious, do more situations like that. Also if shining armor turns out sunblessed I Fing called it.

I just have seven little words to say...
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Scottish twilight!!

glad i finally got to reading this. definitely worth it,

I'll have to get to this tomorrow, though it looks promissing
Just 1 thing that I hope to c, eighther a nightmare moon, though I don't c her tag, or luna shipping with twilight as these are my favorite shipps to watch sail!! ( horrible joke aside... seriously even I find it in bad taste XD )

inb4 people call it a 'Scottish' accent instead of a generic British one, oh wait...

Another fantastic chapter btw.

I expect a new chapter on my desk by morning!

It looks like Twilight Is going to need to ask Pinkie Pie to come with her to the hospital to expalin the other idiot of a sunblessed what exactly is going on and the reason he suck among the sunblessed...

and wow, you gave Twilight's some badass weapons that could be considered the equivalent of Dante's handguns from Devil may cry, and the way you actually gave Berry punch a far more deep background story was beautifully well played, in a way is true that sometimes the bartenders are te ones that listen o your problems when drunk, but wow, Berry is right that she can be the Town's therapist(Sudenly that gave me the idea of Applejack telling her about her dreams or nightmares of seaponies, Lyra and her obsession with humans, Derpy and the issues she have with the ponies with her slow speed speaking and her wonky eye medical condition plus her natural cumsliness and many others more) but she's far content with how she is right now and taking care of Piña Colada( Is written with "Ñ or ñ" not with "N or n")

If I may be able to suggest, now that Berry Punch spoke about Heroics, would Twilight be able to use once again her Mare-Do-Well shared Identity persona once again, at least to trow herself off radar while going for a stroll or patrolling at night? sometimes her magic disguise eithe she won't be able to cast it on herself or simply forget to hide her fangs like it was happening lately so it's a great choice to use while she's getting the hang of the whole Moonblessed Buisness, and even suggest it to Rarity and Pinkie(She would be using hers even just for kicks) or ask them if is ok with the idea

This chapter, well I don't quite know how to describe it. I'm pretty sure that I may know of a decent word or phrase that describes it, but it won't come to my mind at the moment. I want to say more than just "Awesome". Maybe touching and deep, but there's more than just that.
I really love your portrayal of Berry Punch. I like how you added to her character, making her more complex: sure she's an alcoholic, but she's also a very wise pony who has experienced, and learned from, many things up until now that have shaped her into the pony that she is today. Normally, I'd say that Fluttershy is best pony, but I think that Berry Punch may hold that title for today. Also, the added benefits of her special talent are a nice feature.
I hope that the pegasus Sunblessed will be alright. I'm also glad that Twilight finally seems to be coming to terms with her new situation.
This will definitely be awkward when Princess Celestia finds out that she almost had her own student killed...This should be interesting to see to say the least.
I eagerly await the next chapter.

Amazing chapter once again!!! Oh and congrats on making the feature box!!!!

yay

Now this is one hella'vu good story!^_^

I want more!^_^

This is a damn great story now!^_^

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Seriously though, post WoW traumatic stress disorder anyone?

I need moar...

as of writingg this we are at 333 likes, halfway there my bronies XD

on another note, glad to hear y'all like it. for what was supposed to be writing practice this sure has gotten popular

Ill be honest usually when I wee vampony I just skip but you know this story is actually pretty awesome

Have you consider giving that pegsus, twlight injured a name ,
You should have said movie instead of book when berry punch quoted yoda
Movies exists in equestria

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Shining Armour? Sunblessed? That's so delicious... do want.

Also, dat accent. So. Bad. Ass. Unngh!

Berry Punch the Drunk Sage

Great chapter, Twilight and Berry were awesome. More please!

Maybe I missed something, but how did Berry know Twilight was heading towards Rarity's?

wonder how pinkie reacts to the sunblessed attack.........hell i'd half expect it to do a scene cut to her with her having a "i sense a disturbance in the force" moment.....

damn it i think i read to many fics at once, can someone tell me where did crecent came from, wasnt that one ceres

Great inclusion of Berry. Backstory that isn't simply raging alcoholic.
The time is comming where Twilight and Rarity are going to have to come clean to Celestia, for their own saftey but mostly for that of the people around them.
Perhaps a segment on why Celestia did not sunbless her personal student?

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Actually, I would be suprised if the Sunblessed was suppose to engage the vampony by himself considering how 'green' (inexperienced) he seemed; it seems far more likely he was to get the local Sunblessed (Pinkie) to help deal with it. He may say otherwise, but he is an agressive idiot and I do not feel he is the type to follow orders correctly.

If we still had stars, I would give this five. This is a really good fic and it brightens my early morning to read it. I was about to go to sleep, saw this and sleep took the back seat.

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Sleep usually takes a backseat to ponies eh? I call it ponysomnia.

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Pure GENIUS

Another excellent chapter! Though I have to admit curiosity as to how exactly the Sunblessed knew about Twilight in the first place. Did he hear it through the grapevine about Twilight jumping on rooftops?

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thanks to you my face got stuck like that pic above