This story just further proves that stoning with you would be fun. Aaaaannnnnd, First!!!

Very nice. Predator Twilight... me likes.

do.like! want more!

Perrrfectttttt.... this story is very very interesting. I already like how Twilight can contact Luna, thats just fucking epic, so, there relationship is good. But then Celestia and Twilight's relationship comes in, its good now, but what will happen when the inevitable day when Celestia will want to see Twilight again????????????????????????????????????????????????

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oh you should hear some of what i say when I'm fried. I had my friend who wasn't baked at the time questioning reality X3

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oh don't worry, you'll see more of this side of her.

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more you say? OF COURSE!

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oh I have my plans, so many plans...

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If your story image is anything to go by, I'd be disappointed if I didn't.

Heavy cannot wait for next update,

Man, between this and the new chapter of Embracing the Darkness, Vampony Twilight is kicking ass left, right, and center today.

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don't worry about that, let me handle the storyline and pray it doesn't turn comedy on you

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Well i got a long weekend off and plenty of free time so we'll see what I can do.

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great chapter hope it gets updated soon

it coming all great so keep up the good work

Well, that was fun! I was listening to the symphony Vim and Vigor from Kingdom Hearts for the fight scene, and another called Friends in My Heart for the rest of the chapter, also from Kingdom Hearts. Still listening.....

Oooooh i can see that Rarity wants to be a vampony. Just thinking~

Rarity. MAKE ME A VAMPONY I WILL BE PRETTY FOREVER

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Oh come now, you know twi wouldn't be that irrisponsible.

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Who said she going to be irresponsible? Its Raritys little dream of hers~~

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hmm.... methinks you just oiled the creative cogs i gots in my thinker. time for breakfast then brainstorming time.

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Good to hear, do you want more? I have more and more.

Is the fact that Twilight forgot her clothes in the hut going to be a plot point or did it just slip your mind?

Either way, fantastic story, can't wait for MORE!

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you'll seeeeeee

Great story. It's awesome. It's 5:54 in the morning. Thanks a lot.

"my husband, Adam"
Apple family.
Adam
Apple
Adam Apple
Adam's Apple
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This pleases the Derpmister! I must hand it to you bronies, I'm a college English professor, and I wish half the trash that walked in my room would turn in something half as good as you and your kind. I actually found your story because one of my students had the audacity to plagiarizer your fabulous stories. You get an A+ my student will get what's coming

am i really reading a Good Vampony story? really?

now, i may not have read tons of vampony stories, mostly because i hate vamponies, the concept, the way the authors handle the transformation and powers.

but i decided to read this, and im glad i did!
*insert generic praise here*
good stuff :3
<3

Nice, Twilight can talk to Luna telepathically and win in a fight against a Timber Wolf. So much win.

Also: FLAWLESS VICTORY!

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and fatality you forgot the fatality

You know, if zap apples are only grown at Sweet Apple Acres, how would Twilight know about them already?

414948 I yelled to them, my horn glowing with energy as I shut the heavy cellar doors with my magic.



I lifted a few nails out of a bucket by the barn as Applejack took a glance back before slamming the door, and I could hear the sound of a bar sliding into place behind the door.

Twilight closed the door.
And the Applejack... closed the door.

Yeah... I'm just gonna leav this riiight here.

414948 I yelled to them, my horn glowing with energy as I shut the heavy cellar doors with my magic.



I lifted a few nails out of a bucket by the barn as Applejack took a glance back before slamming the door, and I could hear the sound of a bar sliding into place behind the door.

Twilight closed the door.
And the Applejack... closed the door.

Yeah... I'm just gonna leave this riiight here.

you should put a pony in there that looks like this
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Chapter's song: Deku Palace - Cover by Jim Cook

563196 Glad to see someone else saw what author did there.
Nice work by the way man, I can see myself getting even more into this.

Hah. Adam Apple

Faved and loved

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Only got that after reading your comment.

Fave'd and liked. Great story so far.

That would be "ya" not "y'all." Twilight Sparkle isn't more than one pony
I'm looking forward to her other friends' reactions...

Resting in a blackness so wonderful,
and the dream never ends;
so sweetly.

We shall read on.

I turned back to it, looking it in the eyes as I stood tall. I could see the fear in its eyes, and its panic as it lay there bleeding out.

FINISH HIM!!!

I took a step forward, raising my hoof before bringing it down on the back of the beast's neck with a sickening crack. It let out its final breath as the life faded from its broken body

Twilight shows mercy. (kinda)

Not liking the fillyfoolin' (or even sex in general, even if you did provide clear breaks so I could successfully skip it cleanly... thank you for that) but that is nothing new.

What IS unusual is AJ casually agreeing to lie to Applebloom, rather than just be carefully nonspecific.

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There are lies, and there are lies. Most lies are used for selfish ends, but some are meant to protect others. Besides, I get the feeling this interpretation of Honesty is closer to 'trustworthy' than 'openness'.