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i made the header... never expected that, thank you to all those who have been faving and thumbs uppung this.
First!
I want a vampony dashie.
also: It's featured AGAIN!
Not bad. Few spelling mistakes.
"Loose" should be "lose" near the start I think. Ah yes. "You loose count" is what you wrote when Twilight asked Ceres about her age.
Also Ceres= Seras Victoria, no? *Grins* Would that make Luna Alucard?
...Luna...in a big red coat...and a red fedora...*drools*
Overall, quite good. Can't wait to read more when you get around to writing more. If ya need a beta, PM me.
Cheers
GM
no problem. i was just wondering when will you get to the part where celestia figures out twi's ailment tho. also it'll be interesting next chapter when twi meets zecora.
I wonder what would happen if Big Mac became a vampony. He's already one of the toughest ponies around, add into the mix of a vampony's enhanced strength, speed, and endurance . . . well it would be safe to say Big Mac would become Equestria's version of the Juggernaut. *hint hint*
and any would
I suppose would = wound?
I'm putting down to read later but I'm glad your willing to experiment and learn to be better. It might take a day or two but once I do get around to reading this I'll be sure to look over it with with a friendly yet critical eye for each chapter. TTYL
624676 Please, vampire Dash wouldn't compare to the craziness of vampire Pinkie..... Oh let's just turn all the elements into vampires and watch Celestia's reaction.
Without a proper internet connection? So no Diablo 3 then. XD
624747 ALL MY YES
624676 I agree that the idea of vampony Dash has merit. I don't think vampony!anypony other than Twilight, Rarity and Fluttershy has been done, AJ would be sort of pointless and I'm opposed to Pinkie on the grounds that Malkavians suck as a concept.
Every one of the elements getting turned into a vampony would probably set off some alarm bells in Celestia's mind. One is chance, two is coincidence, but three or more is a pattern. All six? You'd have to be crazy NOT to start suspecting Luna of doing it on purpose, maybe in the hopes of messing up their connection with the elements so they can't stop her again.
Screw the story. That is an AWESOME picture.
(ok well maybe the story sounds awesome too)
But that picture
624876 I don't think that being vamponies would mess up their connections to the Elements. I think that it may appear more like Luna is gathering her own little army, and that she may have plans to take full control of Equestria again.
624779 I don't know if vampony Dash has been done, but I do know that werewolf Dash has been done in "Cursed".
That flame-shield spell seems pretty awesome. Great chapter and as always I shall eagerly await the next one.
I guess that all that's left to say is:
Merry meet and merry part and merry meet again.
624696 Big Macintosh is already the Juggernaut, bitch. He may struggle, but he is always strong enough not to be stopped by whatever stands in his path.
624747 That's a good premise for a different fic. Each of the girls are, in secret from each other, a different kind of vampire. Not only them. Celestia is the only one that can make sparkling in sunlight look good*. So Twilight is a "nobility"-type Celestial clan vampire, the undead part of the Apple clan is their more primitive version, Rainbow is one of the Luna-descendant blood-powered superheroes/monster slayers ala Blade, Fluttershy ran away from her clan of sexy vampires because she isn't comfortable using mesmerism on people and using them, Pinkie hides her connection to earth witchcraft full of potions and dark rituals with incantations and blood sacrifices that her kin engage in. Rarity got turned by one of Fluttershy's kindred, but got killed, possibly by one of Dash's kin, so she's mostly clueless and mostly has a very romantic view of the whole thing. None of them know about each other (not even Rainbow and Fluttershy - Dash thinks Flutter was a helpless target of vampire attention, 'shy is worried about Rainbow killing herself trying to defend her) and hiding from others while using the powers to accomplish things is one of primary conflicts, the other being trying to keep Ponyville away from the vampire world's interference.
* Alright, let's be honest. The idea that the vampires' inhuman beauty becomes blatantly inhuman in sunlight is actually quite OK, Meyer is just a bad writer in general. Besides, it fits Celestia and people's view of her as a goddess.
Doesn't Diablo 3 require constant internet acess to be able to play at all?
Anyhow, very nice chapter. Nice to see Luna dealing with her speech this early and not a year after her return
Omg this story.is getting better every chapter keep it up
Let's just hope sompony form the show is reading this
Can't wait for Celestia's reaction
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Dude it's been done on another fan fiction the main 6 has been turned into. Vampires
And Have a bloodlust
625151 Link?
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Look up blood ponies
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Hmmm... now my brain is suddenly stuck on World of Darkness. Pinkie the Malkavian, Rarity the Toreador, Twilight the Ventrue... those are the ones that stand out as fairly obvious to me. Twilight could also be Tremere I suppose.
Celestia, Luna, and Discord would be the three Second Generation vamponies embraced by the setting equivalent of Caine, or possibly have just arisen spontaneously on their own.
Hmm... scary thought though. If Twilight was embraced by Celestia herself after impressing her with her magical power, she would be a Second or Third Generation vampire. That would make her the equivalent of an Antideluvian, only two steps removed from the source of the curse. It'd have to be another Alicorn Twilight fic probably, given that WoD vampires can juggle cars as far out as like Generation 12, and each one is significantly weaker than the one that came before.
625162 Meh, the generations and Ancient Vampire Gods were always among the stupider ideas in oWoD (especially if you don't count later stuff with the space viruses and matryoshka secret Black Hand organisations, the AVGs were there from the beginning). And I'd prefer making new clans tailored to the ponyverse.
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Fair enough. That's an interesting exercise all on its own then too. Hmm... now I'm a bit curious about that as well.
Keep up the good work it getting really interesting.
if you ever need a test reader dont forget to PM me plz XD
that parting sentence...i will twist in pain if that is ever actually used
Diablo 3 LAN without a propor Internet connection? Are you trolling?
The odd spelling/grammar mistakes here & there aside, there are a couple of things in this fic that irk me, so I thought it best to voice them.
1 - The characters seem slightly inconsistent, both in their dialogue and general portrayal. Not so much with Twi, AJ, etc, but it's definitely there with Luna and Ceres.
2 - Dialogue. A lot of the time what's being spoken is being repeated, ends up becoming stale, and loses its impact on the reader. There's also been a few times where entire sub-plots arise, taking up while paragraphs when perhaps they need only a casual reference.
3 - Twilight has been accepted (almost too instantly, or too casually) by everypony who she has disclosed her predicament to. I hope you'll add a dash (no pun) of insecurity in future when she tells the other three, although when Celestia finds out it ought to cause enough ruckus to compensate for the whole story..
All-in-all though, I'm quite enjoying this read, and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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How about make her Celestia's equivalent to a vampony?
Then we could see what it is like.
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And that's not even the whole picture
nice loved rarity's reactions talk about a loud mouth keep it up
Make the rest of the girls Vamponies as well!
okay, this story just got popular
i'll just do a general reply to the three most common things out there:
what i meant with the lan was the ability to do anything other than Diablo. our host somehow blocked out most of the internet's usefullness except for diablo 3.
Secondly, I am not going to turn all of them into vamponies, i have plans for everypony
lastly, corrections and tips for that stuff should probably send to me through PM now, seeing as i had 95 notifications when I woke up this morning
Ok, a question about magic. Since being a vampony restricts what type of magic a user can do and what affects them, does that now make Twilight's special talent of "magic" moot? Having her talent limited would seem like it would detract from her, unless she is somehow an exception due to her talent and time studying under Celestia; therefore having more benefits then detractors compared to previous Primaries. Also, considering how exceptional Twi is with all spells, I would have thought she would pick up new spells faster then the "average" pony (and Twilight Sparkle is anything but average dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png ).
omg a new chapter of this amazing fanfic , keep em coming, this is truley the best and original vampony fanfic in my opinion.
oh and on a side note maybe have one of teh girls tunr out to be awerewolf , i dont know its just an idea, hehehe, or create a oc to be a werewolf, to hut down vampires, by order of celestia or something, since celestia according to your story as an equivlient of lunas curse...its just an idea you dont have to take it, but it would be nice to see what the power of celestias curse actually does.
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due to her special talent she will still be able to use 'normal' magic, just not light magic.
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all will be revealed in due time
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Well being Celestia's student, she must have known a lot of light magic before hand, so that means many of the spells she knows, she can't use. All I am saying is that in my head canon, it just don't fit. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia.png
A very interesting story so far. I have to wonder how much Luna had to push Twilight to accept what she is now instead of freaking out. Otherwise... she is acting very much in character from my perspective.
Good story! Tracking, Favorited and liked.
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Then again she would not have been able to use dark magic before...
Perhaps it would be better to say she can use light magic but not without drawbacks that make it an un-appealing option.
cant wait for the next chapter
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I guess I am just a fan of the "OP Twilight". Though I still have the idea set in my head that "magic" is the umbrella with the different "flavors" (dark, light, red, green, blue...) being under it. So having a talent of magic would therefore allow access to all types of magic; then the personal skill of the unicorn would decide how quickly they learned whatever they set their minds to. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia.png
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I did not mention how quickly she learns, though I would suppose she needs to get a feel for dark magic before it becomes easy and she was starting with advanced stuff.
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Not sure about you, but I don't like the idea of Twilight being restricted in what she can study; being an inquisitive mind, having limitations seems detrimental. I know she has given up on the Pinkie Sense, but there is still so much SCIENCE to do.
Too much use of 'said' :l
625180 I made a blog post about it.
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Lotsa debate over this so i'll explain it the best I can.
Yes, her special talent is magic, and yes Celestia was her teacher, however (headcannon starts here) Celestia has not gotten into the different colors of magic with twilight yet. While Twilight had some understanding of the different 'colors' of magic from her time at the acadamy, she has not received any formal training in black or white magic from Cele. Also, on the topic of her not learning it faster than everyone else, think of it this way, you have a bowl full of murky water, the dark magic is the silt in the water that makes it murky and the light magic is the water itself. you have to separate the magic you wish to access from the other types to use it, since the other types are all in what i'd call a 'grey zone' of magic where they don't hold any specific ties to light or dark magic.
tl;dr: Light and dark magic are different to cast than colored or grey magic, and thus Twi will need time to get used to casting it. Also, Celestia hasn't taught her light magic yet.
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Aside from a spell to calm her down and give her time to think without her brain yelling at her "YOUR A FING ABOMINATION" not much. The rest was handled through breakdowns.
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I do need to get out of that habit...
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I believe that's the first A+ I'll have ever recieved. and you know what they say about imitation being a form of flattery, but it's still good to hear that he's getting his just desserts.
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This whole magic thing is a little befuddling, and I know all I can do is "float and sputter" since ultimately you are the author and have the final say. Also your silt example left me a little confused, are you saying that the rainbow of magics are composed of light and dark and it takes more work to separate out pure dark or pure light? (Similar to how the color spectrum is.) Though back to my first point of contention, by saying light magic will hurt Twilight and Green is, for all intensive purposes, useless, you have effectively cut off two schools of magic Twilight will never be able to learn. So if Celestia didn't teach Twilight colored magics, nor anything about dark and light magic, what was she doing with Twilight all the years, playing chess?
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We have an English professor in the comments; looks like I need to start triple checking whatever I write.
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I never said they are a mix, the reason I called them 'grey zone' is because they are not light or dark, and they require less specialized training to use. I'm having trouble comming up with an analogy with how it works.. but the closest i can think of is a keyboard vs a synthesizer, keyboard being the grey magics and the synth being the light and dark. the keyboard is easier to use since everything is presets but you still need to learn to play it, and while a synth is a type of keyboard, you need to know a helluva lot more to use it to it's potential. as for what celestia was doing, well she did have a country to run as well.
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Guess I was confused by your use of "grey zone" considering gray is a mix of black and white (dark and light in my mind). Ok, so a similar analogy I am coming up with would be like a TUI vs a GUI, Text User Interface and Graphical User Interface respectively. The GUI is easy to use but if you know the right process and commands, a TUI can do far more then a GUI. So light and dark are powerful but complex tools that in the hands of the right user can have devastating results. As I see it, so far you have created 3 (maybe 4) different types of magic, Light, Dark, Gray, and possibly the colored ones, which have their own sub-groups (reds, greens, purples, other stuff that would confuse a color blind person). Twilight is now limited to only Dark, Gray, and the colors (except for green, she can't do that). Celestia is such a troll, "Here Twilight, you can be my personal student, however I will just bitch about my day every time we meet and you won't learn anything."
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as tempting as it is to do that line for celestia, i have other ideas. besides, i'm nowhere near done this one yet.
Dat thumbs up button, Dat fav button, Dat watch button, Dat add comment button.
This fic is soo full of win that i might Explode
Keep it up
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