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Shrieking Arrow climbs to 22 kilometers and willingly plummets from the stratosphere, letting gravity take hold of him. This is a challenge of skill and wits for the daring pegasus. Will he complete his objective? Will he wimp out and break the free-fall? Or will he miscalculate and collide with the earth below?

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When the wind ruffled those feathers the right way, the high-pitched hum would always give away his location. He much enjoyed the attention it brought him.

Ah, that explains the name!

And I don't know about needing to make it bearable; it was pretty darn good when I first laid eyes on it.

Aside from the fact that there isn't enough air to practically breathe at that altitude (to my knowledge), that was good. Joy of flight story gets an upvote from me!

3824350 Admittedly, I may have taken a few liberties with pegasus magic and a pegasus' ability to breathe at ridiculous altitudes.

And thanks for the up vote!

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Should've put that in an author's note or something :derpytongue2:. Really, the most notable thing about this story for me is that it gave me major deja vu.

3825095 Wow! I just gave it a read (as well as an up vote. Good story!). I didn't know such similarities could exist between stories without plagiarism. I assure you that isn't the case, of course.

Faved now? Thanks a bunch!

I really like this, man!

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I can't not fave a story that drags me in so much because of the similarities (in plot and format, e.g. interruptions with status reports). Since you've read the story, I think you can imagine what was going through my head. (Basically: Is this inspired by me?)

Hell, I think I'll even go blog about it, since I can't seem to get away from it.

3825254 Absolutely! Feel free to post about it. I appreciate the help getting my foot in the door, to say the least.

It was kind of unnerving when I read your story, to be honest. What went through my head was more along these lines: "Are people going to think I ripped this story off?"

Only goes to show that I should probably more actively peruse the stories of this site.

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Already done. Besides, the story's like, 1 and a half years old, published sometime a month before you registered. I think it's pretty funny.

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