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hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha wow OMFG hahahahahahahaha
Hahahahahahahahahaha a sexy one shot i aprove of this...i knew where this was going on from the first pargrah and i liked...now im going to get one of my pets to read this and tell me how many times she or he came depends who i find first
uh, mm... k
dawwmn bro funny as heck and for some reason i was erected the whole story
There's a word for this
........umm what was it already
OK yhe
Toooo excessively
Stil daym good
I can honestly say that this was a fantastic story. Personally I prefer Futa over dildo any day, and this story presented an image for futanari pretty well. Overall this was great
... Ok... We'll written and I did like it. Just..... Unexpected
3845926 yes same here I LOVE futa a little too much
I think it was to sudden and brutal, plus Trixie and Sunset were not really needed. I didn't read all of it, but what I did read was good and well written, just not really into the quick punishment. This is me personally, I don't care for it, but I know some do. Maybe try something with just Twilight, Celestia, and Luna, but with Twilight knowing the punishment. Another reason I didn't care for it was it seemed really out of character for Luna and Celestia, I don't know enough about Sunset to tell if it fit her, but for Trixie it seemed relativity accurate. Overall, good, but not mine and some others style, so possibly try a 'softer' version. Hope you don't mind the advice.
WHAT THE F**CK AM I READING?!!!!!! SERIOUSLY DUDE. YOU. ARE. F**CKED. UP!!!!
this felt contrived. I didn't see the need for Trixie and Sunset; I don't really understand when this is supposed to take place - if Twilight remembers Sunset then she must already be an alicorn, but both the unicorns seem really harsh (contrary to their last appearance). Twilight goes from being raped to enjoying it in no time at all.
there was some nice structure and description to this, so I like the style of your writing specifically. you have a good grasp of interesting sentences and not dwelling too hard on nitpicky details. I guess for me it was just OOC and I personally don't care for the plot