Sweetie Belle bumped her head real hard one day, and lost most of her memories.
Will she be able to remember her friends and whoever she met? Or will she not be able to regain her memories to remember her best friends, and her friends, and the ponies she had met?
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As someone who types with a phone, I share your pain. Those keys are so small.
Anyway, this story is certainly interesting. The classic amnesia gag: fuel for many a good story. Hopefully you'll make some good progress with this.
3722035 Thank you. :)
I wasn't sure what to write as my first story, and suddenly ended up with Sweetie Belle losing her memories. I'm glad you liked it.
Would you like me to review your chapters before you submit them? You're making a lot of grammar errors. Spelling's fine, though.
3726347 Sure, why not? But how can you do that?
3726368 Sharing documents on Google Docs? I have an account there.
3726370 Okay sure.
3726376 Do you need my e-mail address?
3726379 Yeah, sure. Just PM me.
Story So far:
Sweetie Belle is experiencing severe memory loss and doesn't remember her own sister. Rarity takes her home, no questions asked and tells her she needs to work on a project. She suggests Sweetie, still amnesic, should go find Pinkie Pie (one of the least responsible ponies) on her own in an unfamiliar town by following a loose description of Sugar Cube Corner.
Continue...
The squeak line was glorious. An odd mix of threat and humor.
Also, did Pinkie Pie really punch Scootaloo...in the face? That seems a little extreme
Anyway, you've earned my thumbs up.
3803714 accidental punch to be exact.
Great work! I can't wait for more!
The only thing that bugs me is some times you miss spell words but thats ok its a really good story!
lol love it poor animals and also poor sweetie if she keeps that up fluttershy will be mad!!!
Will there be more...?