Pinkie Pie is falling hard for Princess Luna, but is she ready to reveal her feelings? Can Pinkie trust how she feels inside? Is Luna ready to hear her? There will be no clop in this version of the story to keep it accessible to readers that do not prefer clop. An alternate clop ending will be considered for those that would like it.
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326329 I certainly will, thank you for the reminder!
This has promise... if it seems a little rushed. I just don't see Luna as the sort who would reward a pony for loving her nights by offering herself on the first date.
326669 If it seems a bit rushed, it was. This started out as a one-off clopfic and then I decided to actually make a story out of this. The next chapters will have a more relaxed pace to them, with less of a rushed feel. I didn't feel like I could rewrite the first part, so I left it as it was. Thank you for the feedback!
I like the premise. i am going to track before reading!
326742 Thank you very much!
hmmm... i dont really think pinkie would say 'fabulous'. i think she would say something like 'Super exra-fantabulific!!'
otherwise like the story! seems my pinkie sense strikes again!
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Good point! And I am glad you like it, I am working on the second chapter right now!
326776 Dem eyes! Or in this case, lack of eyes. xD
Well THAT was awkward.
I'm not sure about this one. I mean i like a good romance as much as the next brony and am even writing my own FluuterMac story, but I try and stay away from the "hard" stuff. I mean, kissing and hugging are fine, i can imagine that just fine, but i just feel uncomfortable trying to imagine were I think this story is going to turn out. Maybe it's just me. Anyway, I'm sure you'll get a good audience, so keep up the good work.
326796 Thank you for reading it! There will most likely be sex farther down the line in this, but I am really going to focus on the story from here on out. When and if that does happen, i will properly tag it, so you know not to read it if it makes you uncomfortable. =)
326815 Thanks!
>>Danielpony I liked the it was really...... Awesome!!
I rate this 10/10
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For real? ^_^ thanks!
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yes really
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326879 I cant wait to read the next chapter. Good luck!
327049 Thanks for the constructive criticism! and for the thumbs up!
Dramatic improvement!!!!!!!!! I love this chapter!
Fluttershy demands MORE
Good work, MANY SPIKES FOR YOU
(FIRST)
333289 This is what I can do when I'm not half starting a clopfic and decide to write a story instead
I'm glad you liked it!
Good job.
Really well edited. I find it strange that Pinkie is saying Spikey Wikey.
Look forward to more.
336222 I believe Pinkie used it once in the show. Rarity seems to use it exclusively these days.
So good so far, thanks please continue.
Dan I love you to death, but you need to update this more you crazy cunt =p
Then I can stop bugging you about it everyday XD
Due to a recent computer crash because of a virus, the realease of Chapter 3 and 4 (which I had almost done!) has been pushed back a bit. I have to rewrite them both, because I was going to release them at the same time. Such a shame, but I am working on it right now. No worries everypony, you'll get to find out what happens next soon!