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Does E stand for Erotica?
You'll just have to keep reading to find out.
..........a tragedy with a crazy alicorn from nowhere tricking pinkie into molesting her friends?.............. well if they don't forgve her for doing that i can definitely see.
...............also, pinkie is not quite THAT naive. i mean, how many villians have she seen so far?
3697248 I have the slight feeling that i know what the E stands for... And, by the way, you are
prettyvery good at writing for your first fanfic.admitably, it is farily well written.............. you need to seperate the sentences though. When the charactersspeak you shoudl divide them into seperate lines, not kept in the same paragraph.
I knew it was missing something.
Thanks for your help!
3702291 i.................umm did you mean that reply for me?
you need to click the arrow at the top right of a comment. looks like a fast forward button. then some numbers appear in the comment box and it links to the comment.
3703599 ok thank you. I'm fairly new to this site. Sorry for the confusion.
what exactly is this E thign supposed to be anway? some crazy rogue alicorn? obvuiosly she is not some kink thingy considering she did not enjoy the smell of the pheremones.
3778327 She is an old alicorn, from a long, long time ago. So over time eventually became immune to pheremores in a sexual way. However, too much of something is never good, and this principal applies here. You have to remember that ponies have a better sense of smell so it was the equivalent to a room sprayed a ton of strong, nasty cologne . Her history will be revealed in later chapters.
3778460 alicorn from long ago........ that is a little generic ya know. then again when dealing with creating an alicorn oc it seems that it is more common to have them be something from the past than anything else.
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One of these days, I want to see a story with an alicorn OC from the distant future. Maybe Merlin style, born at the wrong end of time and aging backwards.
It'd be appreciated if you didn't add all of your fics at once in the submissions box. Although I don't find this a problem at all, simply having been an hour in the group and bombarding all of your stories at once doesn't seem nice at all.
I'm still going to go through them, but try not to do it next time.
5691448 I'm terribly sorry about that. Won't happen again.
I cant wait for the next chapter