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I'm bored, really wanted to read this, but the first few paragraphs kinda threw me off. I'll just run through the errors that caused this to happen. Mistakes are highlighted in red and elaborated upon in parentheses. If there's something missing that needs to be added, I'll add it and highlight it in green.
That's just what I can see. While I want to read this, all the mistakes just throw me off quite a bit. Still, I'll keep an eye out for any fixes made. Maybe then I'll be a bit more willing to progress through what is likely to be a decent bit of clop.
So...many...mistakes.
Epic story though. But your five mustaches has been reduced to three mustaches, so your story is okay.
However, just because of the mistakes found in the story, I'm sorry to say that you need a face palm by Picard.
there's not enough stories that take advantage of the cloning episode.....
i love this,
the concept alone is awesome, pinkie has a huge house of clones ready and willing for sex and the only price is any amount of donations for the needy?
fuckng GOLD.
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Thanks, I have gone through and fixed the mistakes you have spotted. And that part with Discord not being an addict just made me laugh.
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3 mustaches, not bad. And I welcome the face palm after finding so many mistakes, but I suppose that what you get when you write intoxicated.
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And I hoped to remedy that.
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Someone has to help all the needy, and Pinkie knows how to help ponies...in more than the conventional ways.
Best. Ending. EVER.
Really wasn't expecting it, so I found that hilarious.
7/10 Mustaches
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7 mustaches?! Thank you indeed.
Other than a few grammatical/punctuation errors,it was an amazing clopfic.
8/10 mustaches
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So...many....mustaches!
Thank you sir.
2999252 My pleasure good sir/ma dame,my pleasure
Lol love that ending.
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Thank you kindly.
Comedy in clop, nothing could possible go wrong...
""Wow Pinkie, I'm impressed. That is an incredible honorable thing for you to do." to make a bunch of living clones of yourself and sell them off as sex slaves"
so very honorable.....
hm , well that was disappointing , making it a pinkie clone did nothing for the clop , it was still the same if it was just a twixpinkie clop minus 2k word build up......
Too many spelling and grammar mistakes, try to proof read from now on?
Nice Story. ^^
Wonder that there aren´t more fic´s like this here. Or I simply didn´t found them yet...
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I'll have you know all 149 Pinkie clones are there of their own accord, they are free to leave when and if they wish. They simply choose to stay to earn money for ponies who don't have any. The cloning was meant to do something for it, I did have a few ideas (which I couldn't write due to time constraints) about having several Pinkie clones.
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In the future, I will read through several times to try and minimise my fk ups.
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I'll be honest, I came up with the name and wrote the fic around that. Also, glad you liked it.