• Member Since 30th Jul, 2013
  • offline last seen Feb 23rd, 2014

Rainbow Dash856

I love any fan fic. and.............. well just about anything that has to do with MLP


The CMC wake up to see that Scootaloos a unicorn, Appleblooms a pegasus, and Sweetiebell a earth ponyThis is MY Ending to Vacation Death Cruse. I took the story plot and gave it my own twist. I hope you like it! This is my first story so.. tell me what you think

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 9 )

Um... what the &$%^ is Vacation Death Cruse? If that's not how you spell it I'm sorry but could someone send me the link?


VDC is in ask the cutie mark crusaders tumblr from about a year ago.

This story's pretty good, if not too short. Still, can't wait to see how this goes. :pinkiesmile:


Not even gonna try. There are so many things wrong with this, but I'm not even going to bother.

3691572 plz tell me what you find wrong with this? I want to get better.:pinkiehappy:

3691615 Chapters are too short
Grammar issues
Spelling issues
Punctuation issues.
And other things.

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