The CMC wake up to see that Scootaloos a unicorn, Appleblooms a pegasus, and Sweetiebell a earth ponyThis is MY Ending to Vacation Death Cruse. I took the story plot and gave it my own twist. I hope you like it! This is my first story so.. tell me what you think
Um... what the &$%^ is Vacation Death Cruse? If that's not how you spell it I'm sorry but could someone send me the link?
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VDC is in ask the cutie mark crusaders tumblr from about a year ago.
3691375 Thanks!
This story's pretty good, if not too short. Still, can't wait to see how this goes.
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Not even gonna try. There are so many things wrong with this, but I'm not even going to bother.
3691572 plz tell me what you find wrong with this? I want to get better.
Nope.
3691615 Chapters are too short
Grammar issues
Spelling issues
Punctuation issues.
And other things.
3691732 Why "Nope," ?