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Please note: This story is inspired by My Little Dashie, but is without a doubt a completely different story and new experience.
Being a 15 year old with Aspergers is tough, but especially when your parents are no longer living, and you have barely any friends at school. I try to make a living on my own, and try to live off of what I've been taught in the short time I had my parents in my life. But one day, an event occurred that changed my life forever, and brought me true joy.

PLEASE NOTE!!!
The story is in very early writing stages, and not even the introduction is final. I know that some of the writing is a little sloppy, and some parts are a little rushed, but that will all change, I promise. I just wanted you guys to get a glance at this huge project that I am writing. It's ambitious, and good writing takes time.

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Being a 15 year old with Aspergers is tough, but especially when your parents are no longer living, and you have barely any friends at school.

I. CAN'T. FUCKING. EVEN.

So beautiful! I love it!

Being a 15 year old with Aspergers is tough, but especially when your parents are no longer living, and you have barely any friends at school.

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I don't want to even.

This story......I really want to like it. You have a good setup, a kid with a learning disability is visited by Pinkie Pie, but, sadly, it falls under the typical Pony on Earth/ Human in Equestria cliches such as "my character is a tortured soul, he's picked on by other people, his parents are gone and he's barely making it by in life. But one day, his favorite character appears and makes it better". It can be a LOT better, but there's a lot of things you'd need to change to make it better.

Don't let the negative comments get you down, I really would like to see where this is going! If you plan to, PLEASE WRITE MORE! (found this story the day it was published and been patiently waiting 8 months for another chapter haha)

I agree please write more, I have aspergers as well, I'm 16 and my fave horse is the pink one, so it's super relatable. I love it

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

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