Have you ever had to make a hard decision between your friends and your dreams? Ask Rainbow Dash
WARNING: FIRST FAN FICTION!! may not be perfect
Chapters (0)
Derpydash123
Joined 12th Mar, 2012 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- CommanderApplejack · 51k words · 657 20 · 11k views
- Night--Mist · 18k words · 199 13 · 22k views
- theNDinspector · 37k words · 76 1 · 1.7k views
- Tatsurou · 49k words · 119 5 · 3.2k views
- overlord-flinx · 10k words · 140 2 · 2.8k views
- Shimmering Honor · 3.6k words · 43 3 · 2.3k views
- Soniclink137 · 18k words · 233 10 · 8.8k views
- Locomotion · 25k words · 115 5 · 4.7k views
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.09 seconds
Total duration
956 users online
220,910 hits today, 2,782,760 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Not too bad, except for the spelling mistakes and everything is centered.
:3 I hope to see more from you.
Edit: Also, at times, you may want to acknowledge who's saying what.
the format is kinda bad though :/
This is good but it's rushed and can be hard to understand, you should see about redoing this if you can, and possibly get an editor.