When Twilight came to Ponyville and discovered the magic of friendship, she thought that it came with a happiness that would last forever. But when time drags on, and she is forced to accept the curse of her own immortality, she finds that friendship might just be a double-edged sword...
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Better than anything i'll write in my lifetime.
i'll be watching... in that totally creepy way.
Well... the concept's kinda overused, but at least you didn't open with a suicide attempt.
I'd like to see where you go with it.
I always tell myself, "You're not going to read another sadfic, Crab--you're NOT!", when coming across any story with a Sad tag. Then I read it and bawl my eyes out afterwards... what's wrong with me?
Ok, onto my thoughts. There's something about your writing style that makes it feel sincere and rewarding after reading it and it's bugging me... Oh well. I applaud you nonetheless. A couple of spelling mistakes here and there but nothing to fuss about. All in all, a pretty good start. I can't wait until the next chapter so I can waste more money on tissues--which could be easily prevented, mind you, if I didn't have to read every goddamn sadfic that catches my eye!
Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm going to fall into a deep state of depression which will most likely fail to wear off anytime soon.
MOAR!!!!!
Anybody got a tissue?
Tears rolling down my face
Great story! As terrycloth said, the concept is a little bit overused. But for a first, this is fantastic. Keep up the good work!
When was it said on the show that she's immortal?
Not a bad start, minor spelling error here "even when that day oes come" missing the D in does.
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Thanks for that. It's the stupid formatting code, I swear. ; w ;
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It's a pretty widely accepted headcanon that alicorns are immortal. After all, Celestia and Luna have been around for over 1000 years, and that's confirmed.
3647555 But that doesn't mean Twilight's immortal too
3647566 Most think it's a pretty safe assumption, me included.
i need to know when this will be finished i almost chucked my computer when i realized i was at the end
I'm so happy about all this positive feedback! And I'm proud to say that chapter 2 has a total of... 1 paragraph to its name currently. So, yeah, maybe we can expect something by the end of the year. :'D
HAHAGETITTHEENDOFTHEYEARISN'TEVENTHATFARAWAY.
I'm drunk. Happy Holidays, everypone.
I enjoyed this. It's hard to be original with the Immortality Blues concept, but this was an enjoyable read regardless.
Get on with the rest. I require Rarity and Rainbow Dash feels.
For me, this piece was haunting.
As I got towards the end with the journal, I begin to wonder what was in the passage she was reading. My chest aches as I think about what Twilight was feeling this entire time. I have followed to see where it goes!