A story about Owen, a normal teenage boy who has nothing who wants nothing from the world, who literally falls into the land of Equestria. As he wakes up, he finds himself turned into a pony! Now, he must find a way to go back to normal and get back to Greenfield. But a secret lies deep within him that may change how he sees the world and the fate of Equestria forever. Follow Owen as he tries to fight his way back to Greenfield, gain (and finds) his best friends along the way, and discover something about himself that he never knew. Meanwhile in the shadows, a new evil awaits to conquer Equestria once again...
Hey Guys! 
I actually started last year, in October during my semester break. 
I am a newbie here, so I am welcome to any corrections, suggestions, edits, etc. as long as you ask me through messaging me in any one of my accounts.
Well anyway, enjoy! 
You have my attention~
So far, the story fine but it feel so rushed (in my opinion).
Not bad for a first story. There needs to be more description, though, especially during the first chapter where there's a large chunk of just dialog. A great story perfectly balances dialog, exposition and action.
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3834580 Thanks :D I'll keep that in mind.
3833515 Haha. It WAS kind of rushed when I first made it.
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Hehe well keep up the nice work!
Just try to work on more on the details~
H Interesting concept. but Ill wait for a few more chapters before I vote on it.
Yeah, because that's never been done before.
3914278 Well this IS just a fun story I made a few months ago when I was a newbie in the fandom. -_- I know that's not the best I can do, but I'll work on that.
Hey guys!
I will be taking this story for awhile soon because I just realized that there are major plot holes as I wrote the other chapters.
But I will put this back, brand new, immediately after I fix it.
Also, when I put this back it may or may not be completed already, depending if I manage to finish the story just in time.