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BronyMaster64


Fallout: Equestria addict, occasional writer of terribadness, second degree black belt in jiujitsu, gamer for life, hopeless artist (I HAD TO EAT THEM!) and reader of anything I can get my hands on.

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It is two weeks after Princess Luna's transformation into Nightmare Moon and her subsequent banishment, and Princess Celestia isn't doing so well. Her actions weigh heavily upon her, and every day she sinks deeper and deeper into her sadness and regrets. The worst part for her, however, is the loneliness. Her sister was the only one who understood her, and without her constant presence the Solar Princess is beginning to lose her hold on reality. In the midst of all this, Celestia decides to do the unthinkable.

Unfortunately, not everyone agrees with her...but isn't love the most powerful type of magic?

Inspired by the amazing song "Lullaby for a Princess." Cover art by InuHoshi-to-DarkPen.

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..well written indeed, but i have to say neigh to it. the elements would not have responded to her wishes to bring her back.......... this should have like an laternate and Dark tag to it too.

3736398 The way I look at it, the Elements could have sensed the "disharmony" within Celestia and in response allowed her to use them, as she believed that it was the only course of action open to her.

3736762 ...............that makes no sense. they could nto react to someone who is consumed by chaos as celestia was. if it could then anyone could use them. nightmare moon could use them even.
not to mention two others factors. the elements of harmony are idnestructible to begin with, likely because of the tree of harmony, and discord would ahve been unleashed again. so either way the elements owuld reform and find those who currently were the most worthy and thus end both of them.

that and if the guy who is credited as the msot powerful unicorn in recorded history cannot figure out how to survive being thrown out a damn window, then i haven't a clue why he had such a title.

3736872 :rainbowkiss: M'kay, you got me with the Star Swirl thing, but I'd just like to say in my defense he was launched off the balcony; like, at a hundred miles an hour launched.

3736889
luna- you overestimate the capacity of my powers, even as that abomination............ somewhat.

That was excellent! I really enjoyed it. I'm so sorry for Celestia. There is one grammatical error-

His magic bolt flew true, striking the abomination in the back of the head, just below it's armor.

'It's' should be 'its'. 'It's' means 'it is', so unless you were saying that the bolt struck it is armor, you should cut the apostrophe.

This is your first story? Impressive.

3804071 Thank you very much for your praise! :rainbowkiss:

ego swells

3804090 :trollestia::yay: It's a great story!

3992345 Excuse me? :rainbowkiss:

Care to elaborate?

dude this was great. sorry it took so long for me to read, lots of new stuff came out at once so i ended up reading everything in alphabetical order.:unsuresweetie:
anyway. yea, this is fantastic, especially for ur 1st story. i cant wait to see wat happens next.:twilightsmile:

4030571 Wow man! Good to hear from you again.

Thanks so much for all the praise! Hopefully, I'll be back on Warframe fairly soon.

4665113 u fucker u actually did it

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