Long before the time of the Mane 6, when Celestia and Luna were just young fillies and their parents ruled Equestria, Luna's fate unrolls like a scroll. It wasn't always sweetness and harmony in the land of ponies. Before such peace settled, there was rejection, fear, and grief.
Pain will fill the hearts of the innocent, and the guilty will get away with scandalous crimes.
Afterall, what is a life without a little chaos?
Ooooo, interesting. I assume that this is based off the song by Ponyphonic?
I liked it just cause of the title!
I came....
Here because of the title and a saw it in my notifications
It upsets me that you only came here because the title is the same as a song.
Because it's NOT based on the song.
I'd like you to actually like and comment on the STORY not on the title that reminds you of the song. Sorry if I sound like I'm overreacting, but I'd like to hear what people think of what I wrote
And so it has begun
This deserves a fav and a like. I'll try to find a way to put my thoughts into words! Keep it up!
oh discord, I do love how you work lol
epic, so it is discord that causes her to turn into Nightmare moon. figured it was that, but this, it think, confirmed it
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Indeed
This story is basically summing up some things that are left unexplained in the series, and this is just the first step :D
2361742 epic, hate how in the show there are so many things left unexplained. looking forward to the next update!
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Indeed. I think I might even slide in an explanation for the change of Luna's hair from the time she returns from the moon and Nightmare Night
MOAR!!!!!!!............ if that's okay with you that is
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Is there a problem, people?
I saw it before ;)
i love this seris! Please ake more
2381182 yeah! There is a big problem! You need to update more!!!
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*gasps for breath* YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYY!!!!!!!!!!!
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