The Covenant have come to Equestria. Now its up to Twilight Sparkle and a small resistance of ponies to stop them at any cost. But questions remain, how will the defenseless ponies stop a force with the capability to destroy an entire planet in a single day? Were did the mysterious alien force come from? And how will Twilight possibly be able to come up with an offense or defense strong enough to ward off the monstrous aliens.
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...so a wonderbolt fucked Equestria over?
Yeah, Soarin is kinda dopey...
Hmm...I'll watch this...
...OOC....
3576142 Whaaaaaaaaa?
3576078 Thankee kindly!
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You depict Twilight as homicidal.
1) It's "Applejack," not "Apple Jack."
2) It's "tongue," not "tong."
3) You might want to redo Twilight. She's too hostile.
3578870 Ah i see x) I'm not completely familiar with the jargon :P and yes she is dreadfully OOC isn't she? :( She was supposed to be a sort of proverbial Dr Halsey after Celestia and her family were killed in Canterlot by the Covenant it left her with a lot of disdain toward the aliens :/ i guess too much x3 i'll certainly tone it down... Twilight is just too much fun to write as a mad scientist.
3580476 Well this is embarrassing xD i didn't even notice I had typo'd thank you for pointing it out hehe, spelling has never been my strong suit. and i did botch AppleJacks name :/... And yes Twilight is much too hostile, as i mentioned to DezzarTac I was trying to write Twilight as a sort of Dr. Halsey character and after her family and Celestia were killed in Canterlot i felt she would have some kind of gleeful animocity for the Covenant, I guess i overdid it. Halsey never did get along well with other scientists which is why I wrote her as so nasty toward Lyra (I realize Twilight is not Halsey, its just too much fun to write her as a mad scientist.) Future chapters shall be revised. Hopefully with less clumsy spelling mistakes as well.
3580885 It's alright. "To err is human" and all that jazz. I have a hard time with spelling myself sometimes.