Wow. Just...wow.
Sweetie IS a mini Twilight in this story.

dah fuck?! how the hell did she manage to memorize and make sense off all that?! she's like a smaller twilight, just a lot funner to be around.

Sweetie is no longer a dictionary. She have evolved into an...
... encyclopaedia

Sweetie Belle - magical theory savant. I approve. Can Twilight only have one apprentice, or is it anyone who passes all three rounds?

Wow Sweetie Belle just blew my mind lol. Very nice Sweetie Belle.

My reaction to Sweetie Belle's explanation:
How old is Sweetie Belle in this story? You called her an adolescent, so I'm guessing between 13 and 17?
I don't know whose next, but Fluer should be last. I think Twilight might need more than a day to recover. Trixie will probably be putty in Twilight's hooves, Vinyl is probably a freak in the sheets, but Fleur? She (probably) does this type of stuff all the time. Twilight was putty just from meeting her.

well Sweetie ALWAYS has been a little... knowledgable but JESUS CHRIST girl, I think I know why the heck there's so little alicium in you, it got displaced by half the worlds supply of dictionaries and thesaurus's and most of the rest of the planets referance books

3534122 I'd say that was a fair discription of her

Well she sure put her vocabulary to work.

dat sweetie belle text O_O

Daaaaamn, Sweetie, that was awesome. Nice details in her mega-paragraph.

Well...
Sweetie Bell just happened. Twilight just might have a legitimate apprentice on her hooves, rather than a living toy.

Either you just B.S'ed your way through Sweetie's rambling, or you have a hell of a headcanon that needs to be recorded for posterity.

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Vocabulary nothing. That's a straight-up knowledge bomb Twilight just got leveled with!

with her squeaky voice I'm not surprised that Twi might be deaf.

Word Salad.

HOLY SHIT!

I love Sweetie Belle

My eyes have now gone dry with how long they have been stuck on open. My mouth hangs loosely, and thanks to the musculature of th emouth, has not disconnected and fallen to the floor. Wow... just... wow...

3534085 Wait? What's this? Your Sweetie Belle is evolving!

....
....
....

Congratulations! Your Sweetie Belle has just evolved into Sweetie Bot!

May I just say HELL YES!!! Sweetie, you're awesome. And you've been taking lessons from pinkie.

Well, we knew that Sweetie Bell had a large lung capacity...

THANK YOU for keeping Sweetie Belle like my headcanon. Not that you could have known about my headcanon, but still, thank you. Smart Belle is best Belle! (Except perhaps Sweetie Bot.)

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YOUR SWEETIE BELLE USED KNOWLEDGE BOMB

BIT TWILIGHT SPARKLE IS STILL UNDER THE EFFECTS OF THE BOOK FORT, KNOWLEDGE BOMB HAS NO EFFECT!

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My headcannon is a QF 5.25" AA gun circa World War II British Royal Navy.

Come at me, bro.

They walked together down the broad hallways leading to her throne room, there the applicants had been asked to intervene.

This sentence confuses me. I assume you meant to say "...where the applicants had been asked to convene."?

“Of course! You didn’t think somepony posting an ad for a magical Apprentice could do without the mystical wonders of The Great and Powerful Trixie, did you?”

There is an insufficient amount of fireworks for this Great and Powerful introduction. Sin Count: +1 *ding*

“My name is Fleur Dis Lee. I look forward to...” she paused, and leaned in to whisper into Twilight’s ear. “Working with you.” She nipped slightly at Twilight’s ear tip, leaning back slowly and giving her a suggestive smile.

This scene does not contain a lap dance. Sin Count: +1 *ding*

...and listen to citizen’s concerns.

A misplaced apostrophe here - it should be citizens'. Unless, of course, it is a singular citizen with multiple concerns - in which case it probably would have been more polite to name them.

*Sweetie Belle wall of text interview cut for brevity*

There is nothing wrong with this scene.

That wall'o-text. Damn.

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Thanks. Totally missed that jacked-up sentence.

3534118 I hope it's anyone who passes all three rounds. I hope Trixie fails round one.

Ah-ha-ha-ha :D
That was hilarious!

Although, I must say, that it seems Sweetie is the only applicant who is genuinely interested in becoming an apprentice for the sake of learning magic and not not just get in Twilight's proverbial panties. Although, who knows? Cutie Mark Crusaders Royal Consorts, Yay?

But anyway, in a real world, I think Twi would immediately accept Sweetie Belle. But this is a comedy/romance story, so of course we have to drag it out.

Out of the lot of them i fully expected Rarity to try for something too. Granted she is making eyes at the guards soo. maybe she is.

Fleur is the only one i don't want to see win. Trixie kinda feels like it's a required pairing nowadays. as for scratch.... welll.... we'll see how much Twilight can put up with.

www.sweetiepedia.com

When it was just Sweetie, Rarity, and Twilight left, the unicorn hopped down from the throne, and nodded over to a door in the corner. Come on, Sweetie, let’s talk.”

Missing quotation mark.

And this is looking good. Admittedly I only really care about the purple-blue pairing here, but every shipper is biased.

I'm a tad disappointed that we don't get to see Twilight's internal monologue about anypony except Vinyl, though.

Sweet mother of god what he fuck just happened?

Dat wall of text, Rarity would be proud.

Sorry, just noticed this.

"They bowed in turn to Twilight, ho nodded her head and politely gestured them out."
Should be this.
"They bowed in turn to Twilight, who nodded her head and politely gestured them out."

Anyway, love the story.

HAH!

Way to go Sweetie!

~skeeter The Lurker

Sweetie Belle telling it like it is.
Also I figure out SB's intention: She's doing this to impress somepony or somedragon.

Awesome!!!

Though I have a feeling that you got a white unicorn fetish with 3/4 of Twi's possible students being white unicorns. Just exchange Trixie with Rarity and voila, 100% white unicorn mare meat just for Twily~ xD

"crosses fingers for at least one futa-chapter/scene"

“It’s ok. I’ll treat her just like any other applicant, and see what she knows, and what she wants to do here, stuff like that. She’ll be fine. If anything else, think of it as her first job interview.”

Given how she intends to treat the other applicants, I can't wait for Sweetie Belle to demand same treatment as the other mares will surely get. xD

3536754 Is it really that wrong? No, ofc it isnt :3 I'd even say it's one of the best fetishes I've seen...

And a good thing about unicorn mares is they dont even need any extra parts. Futa isn't the only solution :P

My jaw when Sweetie Belle began talking:

My brain afterwards:

The clop will be appreciated, but damn. I'm trying not to fall in love with this Sweetie, but Sweetie is best pony and you made her wonderful. I know she'll probably be kicked out in a heart-wrenchingly cute display after Round Two "Make me cum buckets", but ya done it too good.

The rest of the girls looked slightly put-out, but seemed to be at least a little relieved to be given at least some kind of chance to prepare a battle plan. They bowed in turn to Twilight, ho nodded her head and politely gestured them out.
When it was just Sweetie, Rarity, and Twilight left, the unicorn hopped down from the throne, and nodded over to a door in the corner. Come on, Sweetie, let’s talk.”

"Come on...

welp
10 points to sweetie belle

Dem horse word I enjoy them.

"Twilight was stunned. Had the room gone hot, or was it just Fleur?"
I C WUT YU DID THARE.

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Sweetie as apprendice, the rest for Twilight´s personal harem. Everypony happy.

Sweetie belle is making me feel stupid

oddly enough, I perfectly understood everything Sweetie Belle said.

my intellect is not great but what sweetie said gives meaning to what it was about.....sweetie is impressive

this si mah broiain rye nao

3541292 wat?

WOW, I never expected that in
My reaction:
Holly Mother of GOD!!!

Holy motherfucker shit with Sweetie Belle!!!! That paragraph was FUCKING AMAZING!!!!
Dear Author, you did an epic work in there. Without a doubt. I'm now FULLY interested in this.

Pfft. That was awesome, Sweetie! xD