Rainbow Dash takes great pride in being Equestrias greatest flyer, however that all changed the day a new Pegasus moved into Ponyville. He is a stranger to everypony and he wishes to keep it that way for the rest of his life. After saving a falling pony before she could reach her in time, Rainbow Dash soon discovers that this new Pegasus has ties to the Wonderbolts. She demands a race from him in hopes of proving herself, but he refuses her challenge. Rainbow Dash then takes it upon herself not only to discover who he is, but what he's hiding. However she's going to find out that it's not going to be so easy, and that some secrets are better left untold.
I'm loving it
3627492 Thanks, I try my best.
I love this story!!!! :D Do more!
DO. MORE.
4273996 Okay! Just calm down! No need to get violent. Just give me some time and I'll have the next chapter ready.
4273996 There you go! I did more, just like you asked!
Loving the story can't wait for more!
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4471926 I'm guessing you enjoyed the chapter?
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YEAHZ.
4472687 ......Wow. I didn't think anyone would enjoy my stories THAT much.
Whens the next update?
4523377 I can't say specifically when. I will say, however, that it will be done sometime this week.
This is cool
We all want more
I want more
5145332 Wow, so you really want more?
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of course i do
it's really interesting to me
i do draw and paint on my computer so i can
make some of the scenes
5146987 Nice!
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Hello, Leon XD
Yes, Master Yoda
6872911 I think Yoda would be more like, "Understand, you will someday."
update ?
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I guess I should probably get on it huh? I've just been so busy with school, friends, and especially other writing projects I haven't had the time.