This is a story where Rainbowdash get Twilight Sparkle in trouble. Will they ever find Twilight?!
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PegaSisterPrincessLily
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Oh boy... this'll be fun.
I really only look at these for the comments.
Not sure if trollfic or serious...
this is just wow
Interesting. o.o I actually like it. You did a fantastic job keeping Twilight and Rainbowdash in character, and I like Princess Lilly. She isn't majorly mary-sure, and seems just like an alicorn should. o.o I also like the idea that she is from an "old mares tale."
I think your grammar could use a little work. ^^ Make sure too end your sentences in periods, and keep indenting every time someone new talks. Check your spelling too. Other then that, it's pretty good. o.o I'm actually really looking forward too what's going to happen next. ^^ Well done.
Oh my. This is just fantastic. It's like I'm seeing a Google Transliteration into English. Was this made using uncalibrated Dragon Speech software, or something? I can sincerely say I have no idea what direction this story will take.
Spelling. You need to work on your spelling and grammar. Try hiring an editor, it'll do you loads of good.