Day 7
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Today was the day that Scrooge, Gyro, and HDL could go home. They said their good-bye to the new friends they made during the week. So, Scrooge, Gyro, and HDL whet back to Canterlot to see Celestia. when they got there everything was ready and Celestia gave them a charm so, they can come back anytime. And She send them home.
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Some Month's later
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There was a knock at Twilight's door and she opened it and found Scrooge, HDL, Gyro and Some new faces at the door. She smiled and hugged Scrooge.
"I haven't seen you guys in a while come on in." said Twilight
Everyone sat down and talked and introduced themselves to twilight. Scrooge and Twilight showed everyone to Ponyville.
The End.
I liked this story. Now yes there was some typos but who the hell really cares? Not me, so meh, typos be damned it was a good story. You deserve one of these
In the end, this story needs touching up. It hits and misses on the Ducktales feel here and the misses are minor to someone who doesn't have the entirety of Ducktales on his hard drive or seen the comic series about Scrooge McDuck that has him being an equal with Theodore Roosevelt...
Get an editor who knows his/her Ducktales and this would be mind blowingly awesome.
Play the end theme!
cute simple story,
I half expect for Scrooge to try to make some kind of trade agreement with the princess
I guess the CMC and the HDL are starting a beautiful friendship