i'm a reader and a thinker. But I'm not a great writer.
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I kinda hate to say this but i think this is not the best work you have ever did.....
Now here are sum nitpics
1. Wodent thay be scared of aj and the other ponys?
2. Why arnt thay cute ponys?
3. This needs to be longer.
4. Beder gramer.
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Because.....
1. Stu grew up on a T.V. show called "The Dummy Bears" (Parody of the "Care Bears") Tommy and CO. likes to watch a show called "Oodles the talking Poodle. (Parody of Underdog. (I think.)) So I don't think that talking pones would scare them much or not at all.
2. Hmm... I haven't thought of that. It's been updated so they'll be pones now.
don't listen to them you did you're best to make this so keep on trying and you well do great at it.
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Thanks for the commemt
Whet should be went
I love the story aside from the grammar.