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When a baby dragon starts having dreams about his mother who he has never known, he starts asking questions. However, the pony (Twilight Sparkle) who raised him, refuses to tell him anything.
One day, the dragon is sick of not knowing who his real mother is. He runs away.
He writes all bout his adventure in his diary. when it's all over, he sends a letter to Princess Celestia. The letter contains pages of the Dragons diary and parts of the pony's diary.
This is the letter he wrote.

Join Spike on an adventure to his mother.

update: i started on this even before i knew the synopsis of S02E21

story: chibi95.deviantart.com
idea: whiptooth.deviantart.com
correction: Dragon-guy36.deviantart.com

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When I first started to read this, I thought to myself 'this is just another boring fic that probably doesn't even have a proper ending'. Well I was right about one thing. I believe you could have done a whole lot better on the ending. Trust me, even I have impossible times with it. But I'm sure if you work it out more, your stories will have more than a good story, but also a good climax.

I give A for effort, B+ for result. I hope you take this as a way of saying, you have potential. Use it.

Very d'awww and it's nice to see a good Spike fic seeing as they don't happen as often as the mane six even though he's a main character. I like the inclusion of an origin story and the idea that he would view the world in such a way. It was kinda like the Bourne series but with a short purple dragon on his quest for self discovery.

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