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Her Final Moments

So this story will recount how Luna became Nightmare Moon, and what Celestia does when she find out.
** This story does not follow Season 4 canon**

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Wolfen Spirit #1 · Oct 24th, 2013 · · ·

cool

iloveportalz0r #2 · Oct 25th, 2013 · · ·

The Demon of Sloth

The Demon of Sloth #3 · Nov 20th, 2013 · · ·

Overall, I find the story a little bit rushed. The battle between Tia and Nighty could have been longer, and more dramatic.

Also, the battle would have caused an uproar of a chaotic mess, not to mention that the elements of harmony were included in the battle, and you DO know how powerful they are? How could the maid not know?

Random joke...
Let's just say... oh never mind.
Ugh... Trolly you fail

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