The Unicorns magic. The Pegasus flights. The Earths farms. This is how it always is, right? What if you just had to be the one pony who was different? The only pony in history to be like this? And you had to hide your abilities…. what happens, and how did this happen?
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Hmmmmmmm....
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Hmmm.... indeed....
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I have no clue what "hmmm" means. So I don't know if it's good or not. Eh. Oh well
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Earth pony magic is always a fun premise.
How does she suddenly know how to levitate things?
3697352 Just go along with it. I don't think things through all the way. But I figured she would have to do something, and that was the first thing I would come up with.
Man this seemed promising, but went to speshal snowflake
Well good luck writing, the beginning pretty was good.
Hey, what happened to the Discord tag? Discord does play a role in this story, right?
When will Dawn use more magic?
3849077 I wanted to have a turn of events,but I ended up not liking it. I might have him in the story later on, i'm not too sure when I'll be able to fit him in right. I'll see where my story goes and see if I want to add him in here.
3849810 Next chapter. Don't worry. She will soon be using lots more magic. I debated putting more magic in this chapter, but I never got to doing it.
Man... I have got to be like.. One of your biggest fans, your stories are just amazing and they blow my mind every time. I cannot wait for more to come!
It says elements of magic when it should be elements of harmony
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Thank you for pointing that out! I did not notice that when I was editing. Thanks! It's fixed now
Foals say the darndest things, don't they? It's incredibly trusting of Twilight to believe a couple of foals on a whim.
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Thanks for pointing that out to me. I fixed it just a little to make it seem more, normal. I might edit it more later, I'm in school right now, so I can't do much. But thanks for pointing that out, and that issue has been fixed.
*looks over the first few chapters*
Is there a reason she has to hide her mojo?
>> PrincessAmethystStar you accidentally named Princess Luna twice in paragraph 5