As Sunset Shimmer notices how everybody is still afraid of her, she opens the portal to the pony Equestria and brings Princess Twilight Sparkle back into the Human world. What will happen while Twilight is in this other world?
**Story is currently undergoing a revision to fix mistakes I may not have noticed, and to improve the story.**
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I liked it. Everything seems to be fine. Just make the chapters longer.
This is great so far!
3154999 The next two chapters that I am working on are a little longer
Thanks for your comment
3155147 Thank you so much!
PLEASE make more soon. I really want to see what happens! Favorited btw :3
3155472 I am currently working on Chapter 2-4 at the moment. I will hopefully post them tonight.
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Sorry but can u tell me how long that will be? Im probably in a different time zone than you. :3
3155484 It's 10: 33 AM right now, and It will be posted sround 6 or 7 PM so 9 hours or so
This appears to be quite an interesting tale. I look forward to reading further.
I love this story SOOO much! I can't wait for chapter 6!!!
What a great read!
I enjoyed this chapter
very good chapter, short and sweet.
keep up the good work!
Well i bet
goddamm i dont kniw how to do twilights
Trolestia
damm i cant put the celesfia icon please somepony tech me how to write it
PD im in phone so i must write them
edit:
first
3261205 : trollestia : (no spaces)
Not bad. Kinda scary how security is so light she can just sneak around, though. This is a castle, not a school for witches and wizards!
3314382 She was able to get around security because in Equestria Girls, she was able to get around them as well. I figured I should keep it the same, or there would be no story.
So Celestia never apologized for closing the portal on Twilight and now everything is okay?
is this a celestia bashing fic?