Whoosh Whoosh A blue box appeared in the middle of some woods. A brown pony with a dark brown mane popped his head out of the strange box.
"....I'm the Doctor...."
It's the day of the Summer Sun Celebration and it's been 1,000 years since Nightmare Moon has been banished and now she's returning. The TARDIS takes the Doctor to the strange new land of Equestria. He ends up at the edge of Ponyville and meets Derpy. Together they both go on a quest to stop Nightmare Moon.
Note: Okay, so someone just told me that this looked a lot like someone else's story(I had no idea! :O ) So I am going to give some credit BaldDumboRat/Pierce Smoulder.
Sorry about that! ^^"
i seems as if your blatantly copying pierce smoulder's doctor whooves and assistant audio drama. Its basically a copied script of episode 1 with some parts missing, which kind of messes up the pace of the story i dont know if this is intentional but if it is then you should probably give some credit to BaldDumboRat(Pierce Smoulder)
3362078 Oh, okay! I am soooo sorry I had no idea! I'll be sure to give him some credit!
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wow you really didnt know i mean i was serious when i said it looked like you just wrote down their script cuz some of the lines are the exact same lol you sure you havnt watched it?
3367568 Wow. I had NO idea. Next time I write a fanfic I'll look into other stuff just to make sure it dosen't look copied....
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