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The young unicorn Bluebell leaves her home in Canterlot to make her way in a city half a continent away. Thrust into a new world, Bluebell must find her place as a member of the Manasazi city guard, a group of highly trained individuals who put themselves in harms way to protect the cities citizens. She may be small, but with the help of her new friends she is determined to succeed in her new job. Its either that, or get deported trying.

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You had a few capitalization errors with Bluebell's name. You also misspelled it once, along with other words, I also saw in your author's notes a few words misspelled. Either get an editor or make a habit out of looking over the chapter once or twice before publishing. Good story though.:pinkiehappy:

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