This all started with a conversation on http://gaz-works.deviantart.com/art/Gift-Art-Cosplay-333758514
Story so far (but I'm too lazy to start this far back):
After the Umakage was kidnapped by the Akatsuki, Twilight, Applejack, and Rainbow Dash were sent to the sand village to rescue him. When they arrive an old pony attacked Twilight, thinking her to be Twilight Velvet. The elder ends up being Granny Smith, an adviser of the Sand Village, and joined Team 7.
On the way, they are attacked by Spitfire. She was eventually defeated by Rainbow's new Ōdama Rasengan technique, but turned out to only be a body double. Team 7 met up with Team Mac outside the entrance to the Akatsuki hideout. However, the entrance was protected by a Five Seal Barrier, and that the 5 seals would have to be destroyed before they could enter. Team Mac split up and destroyed the other 4 seals.
Time was of the essence, so Team 7 decided to move in immediately. They prepared to remove the last seal.
A crossover of MLP and Naruto. If you aren't familiar with the Kazekage rescue arc, or haven't read it for a while, I'd recommend reading it again. It isn't necessarily required, but the story assumes you know who the characters are, and how the story progresses.
I want to cut you for thinking of this.
3346331 If you're going to say something like that, at least give some constructive criticism
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okay... don't do a crossover that doesn't make sense to either worlds involved.
3348987 That's kinda the point. A crossover takes two worlds and mixes them together so that they do make sense together. If they made sense otherwise, there would be no point of a crossover.
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yes but you clearly don't know how to do it well so stick close to crossovers that theme naturally into each other.
3350248 I honestly don't think you even read the story, and are just bashing me because I did a crossover you don't like. Whether you don't like MLP, Naruto, or a combination of the two, this obviously isn't a fic for you, and you should have just scrolled past without even clicking on it.
If you actually have something to say that can improve my writing that isn't "don't write a MLP/Naruto crossover" then I am more than willing to listen. But if you are just going to berate me for how I choose to express my love for two good shows, you can leave.
since you get no love, I will give you a like
3351358 Why thank you! Seeing that sliver of green makes me feel that much happier
I just can't dislike or like this story due to it not being my preference of crossover. I don't know if there technically is other kinds of crossover, but my fav is where the main character of a non mlp show is turned into a pony in equestria and must either re-learn skills with a new body or the non mlp character remains a non pony
BUT!!!
I have read about to where Twilight(Kakashi) reveals her(his) left eye and i must say the grammar and sentence structure are a lot better than most stories on Fimfiction have, even when they use multiple proof-readers.
So to be unbiased.........
LIKE
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To answer your question, those could technically be crossovers, but usually fall under the "Human in Equestria" category (which I guess are all crossovers in their own right, but I digress).
Thanks for the compliment! There's nothing like a grammatically confusing sentence to break immersion. That's why I check and recheck my work for errors.
To be perfectly honest, this was one of those "who would be who" conversations that ended with me writing the story. It wasn't supposed to be incredibly creative except for the character casting, and from the 50% dislike rate I'd say people noticed. Whatever the case, I'm glad you found it enjoyable enough to warrant a like.