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Ok i finally updated my Bio. Im not a good writer i will admit that. I write just for fun. and come on who doesn't like to write a story here and there? Well sorry if my storys suck.
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i just hope its plainly romance and not forced.
"A Hole New World" or "A Whole New World"?
»» Fucking auto correct sorry I will change that.
...Great.
You've made something interesting.
Now I need to read your other fic.
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Suggestion: Get an editor, or at least revise a chapter a couple of times before you publish it. There are already a few mistakes in the beginning without even having to scroll down.
Now, I'm no expert on this sort of thing, but there are errors here and this is the beginning. I can already tell that if you have errors on the first line, even if its just a few words, people are more than likely going to stop reading.
1a. Dear is not necessary here. I'm sure most would agree "My faithful student" would have sufficed
1b. It is faithful, not fateful. Fateful definition: having far-reaching and typically disastrous consequences or implications. Faithful definition: loyal, constant, and steadfast. Don't confuse the two.
1c. Put a comma after the greeting
I believe it should look something like this:
1d. Make sure to indent
1e. ...I'm sure that royalty never abbreviate their name. Whether it be for a formal or informal type letter. Hell, you can confuse this with Princess Cadence if you don't put in the full name.
1f. You are also missing the closing.
Welp, I'm sure someone else is going to correct me on the flaws of me correcting your flaws and then correct your flaws even more, but I hope this helps a little bit. *shrug* I'm no expert on these. (Try to) Get an editor and good luck.
Thank you guys but I have 2 problems.
1. I write all these storys on my kindle so ya auto correct sucks.
2. I don't have an editor. If someone wants to be my editor feel free to ask?
3327027 I hate that people will dislike for something as miniscule as Grammer and Language problems when all you have to do is go back and fix it!
3327027 I'll be happy to oblige.
nope.
um. . . that escalated quickly. . .but ok good. . .i guess
Words can not explain how this got out of hand so quickly. But good job, I guess.
Four words that apply to both fics:
Slow, the fuck, down.
I would also like to point out that that was the shortest sex scene in any fic I've ever read.
AND GET AN EDITOR!!!!!
goggle points for aweome reunion moment.
X10
Well that..... Was.......... Quick
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Update?
3327755 two words: grammar nazis
Little hope it continues.