I am a time traveling time lord from the planet Gallopfrey. I love living here in Ponyville with my friend Derpy and her daughters, Ditzy Doo and Sparkler.
Drake was just an average 17 year old from England, Earth. But when fallen into Equestria, decisions must be made that could slaughter him but for the good of everything.
Discord returns with a nasty plot to rip apart the world and finish off the princess sisters.
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Nice story
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Why do you think that?
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everyone has their own opinions.
Eh, the first chapter wasn't bad.
From then on though it feels a little fast paced.
Kick the speed back a notch, add in some more detail and expand the conversations a bit, give the characters a little more emotion and personality and the story will be a lot better.
I'll follow it for now to see what you make of this