It's a nice calm night in Ponyville and Sweetie Belle and Rarity decide to call it a night.
Hello everybody. This is my first fic. and i hope it is enjoyable.
If you find any mistakes please tell me. I am using this to help better my writing.
Just an average guy who likes to read an write for a hobby. but my i love ponies more than anything
It's a nice calm night in Ponyville and Sweetie Belle and Rarity decide to call it a night.
Hello everybody. This is my first fic. and i hope it is enjoyable.
If you find any mistakes please tell me. I am using this to help better my writing.
Good story but maybe add slice of life tag.
I don't see how this is an adventure, but it is a tasty slice of life.
im sure il get around to reading this at some point :/
Very cute, but you may want to split it up into more paragraphs. Such huge chunks of sentences can become a little confusing.
266497 I am sort of new to this so I am not sure how everything works. But next time I am sure to get it right.
ye nice story and all but pleace make a bit of room since well like they said its a wall of text.
Anyway keep up the work.