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I like where this is going...
yay raripie!! its good but i wouldent ask if i sould continue or not it needs to be continued (plus its very good)
3146377 Thanks so much for that feedback! I'll change it when I've got time. Would you mind if I used the suggestion you made to the run-on sentence? And yes, I did use word. I'll fix that too and add more detail.
Thanks everyone!
3150101 By all means use my suggestion. That's why i suggested it
Good to hear you're going to fix the things i pointed out, this story's already shaping up to be something special. I use Word also, i was a bit peeved when the entire 12,000 word first chapter of my story turned out not to have any spaces when i carried it across to Fimifiction, had to go through and manually re-space everything, i was like this - 
- by the end of it.
Looks like you rewrote a lot of this. Nicely done.
It wasn't long ago i sent that message, which makes me wonder if you fixed everything on your own or whether you rewrote this and fixed the bits i pointed out that were still here.
Either way, this is much better than the original version.
Note to self - check messages BEFORE commenting, that way you won't look like an idiot.
Awaiting next Chapter
Was expecting more to happen, but I can't wait for the next chapter!
i'm not usually one to read pinkamena-related gorefics (or similar), but rarity always gets me. and with the description and everything i hope that maybe she survives, but in any case that we get some feely shit.
so with that said...MOAR! i anxiously await following chapters.
Nope, can't find the typo. I think i know what it was, though, and why i can't find it. It must have been that word where there was a space splitting it in two, you must have fixed it with the rest, i'm pretty sure now that it's not there now. Just thought i'd say, i really like how you did the part where Rarity pretended to give up then shouted at Pinkie. That was very well done. Oh, and the larger text for the first line was a nice touch
instead of killing rarity in the end or something like that rarity and pinkie could be working along side one another as fucked up lovers of something THAT would be cool!!
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Shhhhhhhhhhhh
Spoilers.
my emotions are confused.
ah hell, i'll have to favourite this, otherwise my curiosity will never be sated.
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What do you mean, confused?
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well y'know on one hand it's currently a full on express train down to steaming erotica, but on the other there's alwasy that lingering fear that rarity's gonna end up dead any second - plus, y'know, already having been mutilated. so you kind of hope for the best but expect the worst and then suddenly the erotic comes in so you're completely unsure how to place THAT one in the grand scheme of things...
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Well, it was tagged with sex at the beginning, so you must've known it'd happen sometime.
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kinda missed that. oh well. still leaves me anticipating whether she'll kill rarity during or after or if this gets a happy end after all...
Dafuq did ah' just read???
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Why is everyone surprised? It was tagged with SEX from the beginning.
3304583 Don't worry, I saw it. I'm just being me lol
I don't know how to react to be quite honest, my emotions kinda swirled together after reading this last chapter. I went from being shocked and perplexed to being confused but... Enthralled? I hope more chapters will be made as this is a rather exciting tale...
5 / 5 stars
so...how's the next update coming along?
Hope the next chapter's going well, I can't wait to read it, this is getting very exciting and I want to see how this will all come to an end
Don't worry, the next chapter will be done soon!
3346474 cant wait!!!
WHY DID YOU CHANGE THE NAME?!?!?!?!
IT WAS PERFECT BEFORE, AND NOW ITS PITIFUL!!! Shame!!!
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I just decided to. The story is still exactly the same.
3443426 I know that... I'm just saying
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it's sad... I love this story, but I hate Rarity... 
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I love Rarity
. I personally have no preference over the mane 6 (except for Twilight, I dislike her
). I wanted to do a dark Raripie story, but also incorporate the story of Cupcakes
. I have some much nicer stories coming out soon. 
3444039 I have a preference, and that is obviously Rainbow Dash... You should see me when somepony stupidly insults Dash right in front of me hehehe
2 things:
1: FIRST COMMENT BITCHES!!!!!
2: very good! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Noticed a few grammar errors near the beginning however, but those can be easily identified and corrected. All in all, one of the best "Cupcakes" spinoffs I've ever read, and I can't wait to see how it ends.
and thus the fun part is over
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You think the fun is over? For whom,
Pinkie or Rarity?
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rarity, naturally. now she only gets to lie there and get cut up.
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I never said how it ended...
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well, i'm sure there will be SOME cutting.
i'm only dreading whether rarity will survive or not.
hope i'm not sounding too negative, but with the waiting time between chapters, i can only sit there and tense up when i think about what might or might not happen. it's in the nature of these fics, and my nature, i guess.
so yeah...hum...please publish the next chapter soon?
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Working on it. And yes, waiting for you to tense helps set up the foreshadowing of dark events. After this next chapter, I expect there will be angry waiting, as I am not (actually, yes) purposely ending it with sort of a cliff hanger. Sorry.
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well, i shall look forward to it.
...i think.
i i wanted rarity to survive...............and she needs to.........uhhhhhhhh i need to know what happens
The picture reminds me about a german band which has a song that can be translated with "My heart burns".
Oh could pinkie pie be possessed by pinkamena please
C-cancelled?!?! WHY??? I DEMAND A REASON!!!!!
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Maybe I'll just put it on hold instead. 
Exams have taken almost all of my time.
3812706 yes, do that.
This is... Cute and creepy... Are you still going to finish this story? I know It's been a year since you've updated...
I hope this story isnt dead this was pretty hot.
Well, I'm not a big fan of Cupcakes whether it be t original or it's spin-offs
but, idk this seems al'rite in a weird way 
. Altho, don't ask me how cause i'm still figurin that out myself 
; Anyways all i know is that if rares survives this then who knows what t buck her mental state is goin to be lik afterwards 