2 things:
1: FIRST COMMENT BITCHES!!!!!
2: very good! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Noticed a few grammar errors near the beginning however, but those can be easily identified and corrected. All in all, one of the best "Cupcakes" spinoffs I've ever read, and I can't wait to see how it ends.

and thus the fun part is over

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You think the fun is over? For whom,

Pinkie or Rarity?

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rarity, naturally. now she only gets to lie there and get cut up.

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I never said how it ended...

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well, i'm sure there will be SOME cutting.
i'm only dreading whether rarity will survive or not.
hope i'm not sounding too negative, but with the waiting time between chapters, i can only sit there and tense up when i think about what might or might not happen. it's in the nature of these fics, and my nature, i guess.
so yeah...hum...please publish the next chapter soon?

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Working on it. And yes, waiting for you to tense helps set up the foreshadowing of dark events. After this next chapter, I expect there will be angry waiting, as I am not (actually, yes) purposely ending it with sort of a cliff hanger. Sorry.

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well, i shall look forward to it.
...i think.

i i wanted rarity to survive...............and she needs to.........uhhhhhhhh i need to know what happens

The picture reminds me about a german band which has a song that can be translated with "My heart burns".

Oh could pinkie pie be possessed by pinkamena please

C-cancelled?!?! WHY??? I DEMAND A REASON!!!!!

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Exams have taken almost all of my time. Maybe I'll just put it on hold instead.

3812706 yes, do that.

I hope this story isnt dead this was pretty hot.

Well, I'm not a big fan of Cupcakes whether it be t original or it's spin-offs but, idk this seems al'rite in a weird way . Altho, don't ask me how cause i'm still figurin that out myself ; Anyways all i know is that if rares survives this then who knows what t buck her mental state is goin to be lik afterwards

I'm sorry everyone. School has been a nightmare, and I'm currently working on other stories and a couple of novels. I hope to publish more soon, and I think the ending will surprise you.

You misspelled 'very' as 'vary'.

I really enjoyed this! I like rarity x pinkie pie rare pair