How will she overcome the giant that is mr. T will fluttershy be able to bring home the gold? I know, but you don't because you have to read the story silly :P
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Keep the dis-likes coming people it brings me great joy
A heartwarming tale of strength and perseverance in the face of tremendous obstacles.
And Fluttershy punching Mr. T.
3128361 You want dislikes? You get dislikes!!!
...Well, didn't actually read, but I figure why not bring great joy to you?
Damn, Fluttershy must've hit this story hard, seeing all the blood there is. Oh wait, that's just the...
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...dislike bar
3128857 Why do you think I asked for dis-likes
The image of Fluttershy's jaw flying across the air and landing just barely off the edge of the ring side, made me think of that movie that'll never get a sequel, The Golden Compass when the bear just slapped the other bear's lower jaw clean off.
You have earned your dislike disguised as a like but is really a dislike because it's what you wanted and makes the bar look so much more gory.
Rest now little Shy, you done beat Mr. T.
3130296 I will keep your "dis-like" very close to my heart thank you.
Nice, and I have a way to improve your stories
It's about your commas, here's a example:
Dashie, Flutters and Pinkie.
Dashie,Flutters and Pinkie.
The 1st example is the way you put a comma. You put the comma and then leave a space.
The 2nd is the way you put commas. You don't leave spaces after commas
If you follow my advice your stories will surely improve. Btw, I liked your story
3138005 Thanks for honest feedback
I know I am suppose to put a space after a comma.... I'm just lazy 
3141062 Lol, okay
This story needs a makeover, From Top to Bottom.