Author: The 8-Bit Flame Princess
Prompt: Small
The euphoria of their canteen performance had worn off, and Twilight walked over to Pinkie Pie- it was still kind of hard to wrap her head around the fact that there were replicas of her friends in this world. The pink girl was excitedly jumping about, like a small puppy.
“Hiya Twilight! Didn't that just go fantastimazingly?!” she said, bouncing of the balls of her feet- that was another weird thing. Hooves were now feet. She still fell over sometimes.
“You’re so small.” she absentmindedly murmured, staring at Pinkie Pie.
Pinkie gasped in protest. “I’m not small, you’re just giant! I’m five foot three, that’s not small! If I was small I wouldn't be able to do this!”
And with that, she stretched and planted a firm kiss on Twilight’s mouth, leaving the purple girl wide-eyed, with her hands flailing around, not sure where to place them.
Pinkie pulled away and giggled. “See?!” and she skipped off to talk to Vinyl Scratch.
Twilight stood, staring into the distance dreamily.
“That was … wow.” she sighed.
A scratchy voice chuckled.
“Are you giving out free kisses now?” Rainbow Dash asked.
Twilight Sparkle bristled. “Why, you want one?”
“Wouldn't mind.” the athlete leaned in closer.
“NO!” yelped Twilight, pushing her away.
Hm... I'm not sure how to feel about this one. It was pretty short, and there didn't seem like there was a point to the scene. What I mean by that is there was no plot behind it, no back-story, just an offhand comment about Pinkie being short and then they kiss. I commend you for being original in choosing the Equestria Girls universe, but you should've added more details to this entry. I also wasn't a big fan of Rainbow Dash showing up and asking if she could get a kiss too, but that can be chalked up to me not liking TwiDash.
It wasn't necessarily bad, but needs work.