Charles Williams went to work that day thinking it would be another normal day, what he got instead was much worse. Burned and broken in a horrible accident Charlie finds himself in the home of a very kind caretaker with almost no knowledge of how he came to be there. The weirdest thing about it all though is his caretaker is a butter yellow, pink-maned pegasus. As Charlie learns more about the world he landed in he starts to wonder if he'll ever be able to get back home or if his new friends would let him go that easily.
Chapters (2)
This is quite good, it will be looking forward for more
3097860 Thank you
With a rebel yell, she cried, "More, more, more."
...Please?
3110400 lol, yeah I'm working on Chapter 2 now
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I am yearning to read more of this. I demand you update soon.
You've done very well, my friend! Very good job! I eagerly await the future of this story!
3163248 Thanks Nick, that means alot
One. I sort of understand what your going through, I went through something like it before.
Two. This story is awesome, please keep it up! And if you might need one, I could be an editor for you.
Three. I still say Peace Out alot, mainly cus my grandpa's a hippie.
3285512 Thanks for taking the time to read my story and yeah I think I may need an editor though I'm not sure im not exactly sure what all that entails
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It just means that I view the chapters before they are released and tell you what or if anything needs to be fixed and if you should add anything.
3301151 Gotcha, Well then I'd love to have you if you're still up for it.
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Of course, I'd be glad to. Sorry if I don't answer your message right away or if it takes a while for me to proof read, I have a very busy and interesting life that causes me to be away from my computer for long intervals of time.
A truley tender moment between father and son.
Dude, commas exist for a reason. Use them.