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HUMANIZED When two musical brothers, Electronic Notes and Hard Chord, move to a new town that has been known for horse migration and given the nickname Ponyville, they are put into a new school.

Meeting new and old friends is a basic. Mean teachers and enemies add to the fun. It's average everyday stuff for high school.

Chapters (19)
Comments ( 22 )

It's a awesome story but when you transition from one brother to the other brother in stead of puting ______'s POV just put a line under the last chapter like this
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And PLEZZZZZ!!! Make the chapters longer or take two of your short chapters and put them in one chapter
Allso I like the main character's personalities
Thay remind me a lot like me and my brother (but he doesn't play a instrament)

Don't put things in the middle of the story explaining things like you did when they were in ther home room. I understood what you ment you don't have to explane it to me your readers are not dum and also if you make a refrence don't out and tell me it's a refrence
Let people that get it, get it and then at the end of the chapter say "did you see/get the refrence to the walking dead"

Also slow down and put more details the story so Far seams rushed

And I'm not saying all this just to be a dick
This story with these character's have SOOOO much potential and I want this story to be good
And I'm looking forward to the next chapter

But PLEZZZZZ!!!! Don't rush and don't stop in the middle of a chapter to explane or tell me something
Cuz when you pulled me out of the story to say your locker room had a teachers office I didn't need to know that, my school has one in the locker room to so I can relate to this story but now I can't cuz you took me out of the story
Cuz just like every one else we want to feal like where at the school seeing all this happen wile we (the reader) is in the background but we can't do that if you interupt the story bro

I lafed at the valentines thing (it's ether because I'm a tarable person or its because I did something like that but the results were waaaaaaay worse for me ~_~)
Awesome story so far

Ok chapter, can't wait for the next hopefully something funny happens( i have a feeling something would) also it was there second day of school shouldn't they have alternating classes on there school schedule( like a even classes day and a odd classes day (or is it just like that at my school))

There's no Great Britain in Equestria, it would be a Canterlot accent. -__-

So many down votes. *Sigh* this fic needs more uppers then downers in the voting place.

3103324 Finally a nice comment.

Comment posted by Mile High deleted Aug 26th, 2013

Damn he's going to get some of that ass

So.....They both gonna get some ass in the future.
Yah buddy dis gone b good.

4440908 Well... at least your comment wasn't about booty so I will.

4444610 There, done just for you.

4442599 but booty is more important than eating its more important than drinking water. I'm a booty warrior!

4456884 Leave me alone, Space Dandy!

I'm surprised notes didn't go full beta mode or spill spaghetti all over the place in that last chapter also the whole vinyl's POV was weird and a little forced but whatever

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