Becoming fearful of Princess Celestia, Discord decides he needs to take action. What exactly that action will be is unclear.
Please leave feedback/constructive criticism if you so desire.
Chapters (1)
Pnakotic
Joined 21st Feb, 2012 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- naturalbornderpy · 4.5k words · 394 4 · 5k views
- RoyalCanterlotVoice98 · 2.1k words · 39 5 · 2.5k views
- Mikleo · 12k words · 73 6 · 2.6k views
- lunabrony · 2.1k words · 46 3 · 5.6k views
- kudzuhaiku · 2.1k words · 71 17 · 1.3k views
- Timpeni · 5.2k words · 1,035 45 · 33k views
- naturalbornderpy · 3.6k words · 596 7 · 8.1k views
- Just a tree · 16k words · 598 24 · 6.2k views
Featured In1
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.108 seconds
Total duration
1,008 users online
1,955,267 hits today, 2,782,760 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
And then Rarity cried for hours.
Pie war. The best kind of war.
There should be a comma after "Celestia".
3013284 I pie you now.
3013295
Do you even pie?
3013350 Of course I pie, shuddap! *Throws pie at you then runs off, laughing like a maniac!*
3013284 Fixed, Thank you.
yay pie! I pie you pie we all pie for pie pie!
I liked it. I just read a sad one, and needed a happy one. This did the trick thanks!
-
Cute
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!
Awesome! Hilarious! There are no words!
(Review for the Villains of Equestria Feature Folder)
Very sweet and a bit creative for such a simple concept.
The grammar and punctuation need a bit of work, but the overall story is well made.
If you need some help, I could help you fix the errors scattered across the story. I won't be open all the time due to the semester, but I could find a time to assist you.
Ahaha! When I realized they were having a pie fight I nearly fell into stitches!
Great job! True to Discord's personality as well as hilarious!
HOLY (
buysomeapples!) I totally fell for the "red liquid" bit!
Awesome and hilarious