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After Rainbow Dash has an accident that leaves Rarity in the hospital, Rarity begins to wonder about whether or not the accident was caused by what occurred at the Best Young Fliers Competition, or if it was something else entirely. Rarity X Rainbow Dash
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This is good.
I can't wait for more.
More I need more.
Element of Loyalty + Element of Generosity = Element of Sacrifice.
Sacrifice entails the willingness to face near-certain doom if it means saving someone you care deeply for.
I really enjoyed this story. I can't wait for there to be a sequel
A little rushed, as you said, but it was good.
I liked it.
Hope to see more!
That was fantastic, I loved every moment of it!
Continue please?
Very nice job. I was wondering, could you make the next chapter a bit longer? I do enjoy it a lot.
Oh Dashie, you so silly.
I don't usually ship them, but this story's pretty cool.
Very good, I would advise slightly longer chapters. Also, Rarity's reaction to waking up seemed a bit....out of character, for lack of a better term, I'm sure that she would be freaking out in total drama queen form if this were to happen. Aside from very slight character flaws, the story is well written and has a LOT of potential, I'll be watching this one, great work!
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I had her react the way she did because she's obsessed with her image. Think about it: the one pony who's always fretting about her looks wakes up after a 3 month coma, knowing every bone in her body was broken, not to mention that she hasn't been able to bathe herself or style her mane and tail (I forgot to put the fact that she had a perfectly straight mane in the story), and if she swooned, it would add a comedy tag I don't want. So I chose reaction 2, which is to attempt to ignore everything that's wrong.
I feel the pain dude. I feel it.
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oh man XD last part made me laugh
when are you going to continue? so far it's awesome :D 
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Halfway through typing the next chapter. Inspiration is touch and go
i love it and i got a question will more chapters for this story come out soon
wow 0-0 i did not see that coming.....it's so....AWESOME
i hope we get some more soon 
3326105 yeah it dose and ok
Ooh, that was unexpected. Looking forward to the next chapter.
You're quite good at this.
Aaaahhh! Rarity the Pegasus! Feed me mooorrreeeee
(Here from the self promo group.)
Very good story so far, it's very detailed. I have only one nitpick though. The scenes are paced a little too quickly.
But hey, I love Coma stories (and I'm actually writing one myself) so this gets a like and fav in my book.
EDIT: Did I forget to mention that Raridash is my favourite ship?
Ah, I understand your pain man. I had to use WordPad for nearly an entire month before I finally decided to use my Microsoft disc. No spellcheck, no word count, and most importantly, no word art!
That's....actually a really interesting reason. A lot more interesting than just 'i was born in a cloud place lel'
Please excuse my lack of grammar. Ahem, MORE PLS CMON I NEED MOREEEEE MKJSNEOICEJIWO! Pardon me.
Uh oh, we might need to fight the princesses